拜託幫我看看一下自傳~~~

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下面是我的自傳中英文版 我是先寫英文 然後在翻譯成中文
可是翻譯中文的技巧真的很爛阿 害我都覺得很丟臉
所以就麻煩這裡的高手們 幫我一下忙囉~~
當做做公德八~~~~拜託拜託囉 麻煩寄到我的信箱囉~~~
感恩!!! 文法若有錯誤的話 拜託幫我改一下囉
以下是我的英文自傳
The person who is optimistic and always willing to absorb new knowledge is me. I was born in a lovely family in Taoyuan. There are two people live with me, my mother and my sister. My father passed away six years ago, because of the cancer. In my childhood, they told me no matter what difficulties and challenges I face, I have to overcome it without fear. Based on the reason, I have a positive perspective on life.
I studied in XXXX, a famous university in Taiwan. From 2000 to 2004, I majored in B.A. and from 2002 to 2005 I also studied Elementary Educational Course. In the school days, I benefited a lot of things, not only learning but also planning and preparing activities, such as camps and performance.
After school, I did so many part-time jobs, which are almost service industry and tutoring. Those experiences provided me how to communicate and coordinate, even promote myself. I think my personal properties are that I have positive and optimistic
outlook on life, good co-work spirit and word responsibly. I do understand how to release my pressure that doing sports is my way. Nowadays, I have prepared for all challenges and difficulties coming along with my job.

以下是我的中文翻譯自傳
生活態度樂觀且願意去吸收新知識的人就是我。出生在幸福美滿的桃園家庭，媽媽及妹妹與我同住，而爸爸在六年前因為癌症去世。在我小時候，爸媽常常告訴我，無論遇到什麼困難，都要勇敢的去面對克服它。在這樣耳濡目染的教育之下，我有一個正面及遠大的心。
我就讀XX大學，是台灣有名的私立大學。在2000年到2004年，我主修企業管理學系，而2002年到2005年，我輔修國小教育學程。在學校的日子裡，我得到非常大的收穫，不只是在學校的課業上，在社團上的企劃作業以及舉辦活動例如露營、表演活動等。都讓我學習到很多的經驗。在課後，我大部分的時間在打工，我做過服務業及英語教師。這些種種的經驗，提供我如何去組織及加強人際關係，甚至可以提升自己的競爭力。
我想我個人的特質就在於我有一個正確且樂觀的生活態度，非常好的工作互助精神，和負責的心。我知道當我有壓力時如何紓解自己，像做運動就是我的方式。而現在，我已經全部準備就緒，去面對在未來工作上所會經歷的各種挑戰及困難。

Answer 1

IT IS I who ARE optimistic and always willing to LEARN new THINGS. I was born in a lovely family in Taoyuan. I LIVE WITH my mother and my sister. My father DIED OF CANCER six years ago. In my childhood, MY PARENTS USED TO TELL me no matter what difficulties and challenges I face, I have to overcome THEM without fear. SO I have positive AND perspective NATURE.

I studied in XXXX, a WELL-KNOWN university in Taiwan. From 2000 to 2004, I majored in B.A. and from 2002 to 2005 I also studied Elementary Educational Course. WHILE I WAS IN SCHOOL, I HAD LEARNED a lot, not only STUDING but also planning and preparing SOME activities, such as CAMPING and performance.

After school, I did many part-time jobs, AS A CLERK AND A TUTOR, ETC. Those experiences PROMOTED me IN COMMUNICATING AND COORDINATING WITH PEOPLE. I think I have positive and optimistic THOUGHTS UPON MY life, good COWORKING spirit and OF MUCH responsibly. I AM REALIZED how to release my pressure LIKE PLAYING SOME sports. Nowadays, I have prepared TO CONFRONT WITH all challenges and difficulties OF MY FUTURE CAREER AHEAD.

2006-03-20 15:15:59 補充：
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Answer 2

這位網友你好

我本身也有遇過這問題

急需用錢 找銀行真的太慢了

我知道 中壢仁寶當舖 有在幫人代辦二胎

估價速度快 放款速度快 息低保密

你可以去詢問看看

我之前有在那裡借過 服務態度好 辦事效率好

真的是短期週轉的好幫手

放心啦!仁寶當舖是政府立案合法當舖

網路上的風評也非常好

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