請各位大大幫我修改一下這篇英文作文

Question

題目：很多人都夢想著要環遊世界，你也喜歡嗎?請寫一篇文章。
(1)說明大部分的人想要環遊世界的原因。
(2)說明你最想去的地方及原因。

Most of the people want to go around the world, becausethey want to see beautiful sights or natures. They also want to by something to show friends. but that is not my cup of tea. I want to go around the world, because I want to make friends all around the world, and see differences between Chinese and the others.
I would like to visit japan and Russia. In Kyoto, Japan the streets and the houses are almost the same as Tung dynasty in China.
I saw the beutiful photo of russia building on a magazine. I\'m intresting in historical and beautiful things. So I would to visit these two places.

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Answer 1

Most people have the dreams to be able to travel around the world some day, because they want to visit beautiful places or to explore different cultures. They also want to buy some things which are not available in their countries in order to show off to their friends. Yet, that is not my cup of tea. I want to travel around the world, because I want to make friends with others and would be able to see what the differences are there between Chinese people and others.I would like to visit Japan and Russia. The streets and the houses in Kyoto, Japan for example, are similar to those scenes which could be found in China's Tung Dynasty.  I ever saw the beautiful photos of Russian buildings in a magazine. I'm interested in historical and beautiful sceneries. So I would to visit those two countries first.

2006-03-13 12:06:35 補充：
I ever 我曾經
沒錯啊, 是美國式的用法
是你想得太多了
如果你真要想的那麼多
那這句開頭應該改成
I once have ever seen.....
英國式用法好了

Answer 2

Most of the people want to go around the world because they want to see beautiful sights or to get close to the nature. They also want to buy something to show to their friends; but, that is not my cup of tea. I want to do it because I want to make friends all around the world and to see the difference between the Chinese and the others.
I would like to visit Japan and Russia. In Kyoto of Japan, the streets and the houses are almost the same as the ones of the Tung dynasty in China.
I saw beautiful photos of Russian buildings in a magazine. I'm interested in historical and beautiful things. So, I would like to visit these two places.