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You are never given a dream without also being given power to make it true, you may have to work for it,however. I want to work as a soccer player manageress because I loved the fascinating world cup. Kahn made a good impression on me. He is a goalkeeper and he has sense of responsibity. He struggle for the race. I also loved the rest of team. For example Brazil, Italy, England, Netherlands. and Spain. The world cup appeal to everyone but some people said that Korea Republic bribes the referee. I think it is terrible. I would rather trust Korea Republic. They just make good progress.
If I were a soccer player manageress maybe I will fall in love with acoccer player. I can brag to my friend. I can encourage and support him. I want to be his leading actress. I do not want to resign myself to defeat, so I will try my best to pursue my dream. Let it fulfill.
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Answer 1

You would have never been given a dream without having been given a super power to make it come true. It's because you may need to work hard to reach the dream.My dream is to be able to work as a manageress for a soccer team because I am fascinated with the World Cup. Especially I prefer Kahn who has left me a good impression for his excellent skills in playing soccer. He is a goalkeeper, in addition, he has a sense of
responsibity. He struggles for the race. I also love the other teams, including those teams from the countries such as Brazil, Italy, England, Netherlands. and Spain. The World Cup is appealing to almost everyone, but rumors said that the Republic of Korea had bribed one of the referees. If it is true, that really sounds terrible. I would rather have faith in the Republic of Korea
Republic. They have just made a good progress in the game.If
I were a soccer player manageress, I might fall in love with
a soccer player. I can brag about it to my friend. I could also encourage and support
him. I want to be his leading actress. I do not want to resign myself
to defeat, so I will try my best to pursue my dream and to make it come true some day. Let my dream to be fulfilled.

Answer 2

You are never been given a dream without also been given power to make it true, you may have to work for it. However, I want to have a job as a soccer team manageress because I loved the fascinating world cup. Kahn gave me a good impression. He is a goalkeeper and he has sense of responsibity. He has struggled for the race. I also loved the rest of team. For example, the appealed world cup in Brazil, Italy, England, Netherlands, and Spain, lots of people said that Korea Republic bribed the referee. I think it was terrible, I would rather trust Korea Republic, who has made a good progress.
If I was a soccer team manageress, maybe I woud fall in love with a soccer player. I want to be his leading actress, who will encourage and support Kahn and brag all this to my friends. I do not want to resign myself to defeat, so I will try my best to pursue my dream, and let it come true.