請幫我看看這樣的句子寫得對嗎?? 感激不盡

Question

以下的每一個句子都是獨立不相關的，我英文太破，請幫我檢查是否有文法或用字不妥的地方。謝謝!!
1.My favorite singer is A-mei, because her singing has the charm very much.
2.I think probably me to have already got married the kid.
3.If there were no television in my life, I will have more time to exercise.
4.Because may accumulate the work experience and earn the living expense.
5.I may go read the different type the book.
6.Has a person to be able to share in the life together.
7.Time that can freely arrange becomes less.
Two people having different backgrounds, so can easily provoke conflicts in daily life.
8.I feel anything is very convenient in Taiwan.
9.The good friend shares the worry and gives to support.
10.I hope in the bread store work, because I love to eat the bread very much.

^^"" 對不起，其實第二項的問題是問我有沒有想過五年後我在做什麼，所以我的回答是說""我想很可能我已經結婚並且有小孩了(或當媽媽了)。""

Answer 1

1. My favorite singer is A-mei, because her singing has the charm very much.  A-mei is my favorite singer; I like her charm so much.2. I think probably me to have already got married the kid. (這句話英文語意怪異，請把中文原意告訴我以便處理)3. If there were no television in my life, I will have more time to exercise. If there were no television being invented, I would have spent more time to exercise.4. Because may accumulate the work experience and earn the living expense. The accumulative working experience could get well paid for a good living.5. I may go read the different type the book. I like to read different types of books.6. Has a person to be able to share in the life together.  There is a person who is able to share his life together with other people.7. Time that can freely arrange becomes less. The freedom of arranging my time becomes limited.8. Two people having different backgrounds, so can easily provoke conflicts in daily life. People come from different backgrounds tend to conflict against each other in daily life.9. I feel anything is very convenient in Taiwan. I think Taiwan is a very convenient place to live. 10. The good friend shares the worry and gives to support. A good friend is the one who shares your worry and give you support when needed.11.I hope in the bread store work, because I love to eat the bread very much. I hope the bakery runs well, and then I could always get my favorite bread from them. (麵包店正確的稱呼是bakery) 

Answer 2

第二題：
2.I think probably me to have already got married the kid.
她大蓋的意思是：我想我有可能嫁給這個孩子。
I think probably I have already got married the kid.
第六題：
6.Has a person to be able to share in the life together.
你是要寫：有一個人他能夠跟某人共享生活。你直接把「有」翻成has是不對的，另外share 要加介系詞with O
某人

Answer 3

1.My favorite singer is A-mei, because her singing has the charm very much.
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　=> her voice is very charming.

2.I think probably me to have already got married the kid.
這句可否附上中文，因為看不太懂你要表達的意思！

3.If there were no television in my life, I will have more time to exercise.
這句應該想要使用『與現在事實相反』的實態
可是使用上有些問題，文法應該為：
If + S + V過去式..., S + would / could / should / might + V原式....
所以應該改為If there were no television in my life, I would have more time to exercise.

4.Because may accumulate the work experience and earn the living expense.
這句話少了主詞，一樣可能要由中文才能知道主詞是什麼，我想應該是he or she
加在 may 之前。再者，Because擺在句首，作為連接詞用，後面應該要再有一句
話，否則不能直接把Because擺在句首用。

5.I may go read the different type the book.
應該要用go to read

6.Has a person to be able to share in the life together.
這應該是倒裝句的形式，應該改為Has a person been able to share------
不過我還是不太懂翻譯成中文要表達的意思 ^^"

7.Time that can freely arrange becomes less.
這句話應該是說可以用來自由規劃的時間越來越少了吧！
如果是的話，我會這樣翻譯：
My free time becomes less and less.
而下一句話
Two people having different backgrounds, so can easily provoke conflicts in daily life.
=>Two people have different background, so one can provoke another easily in daily life.

8.I feel anything is very convenient in Taiwan.
這句話是說在台灣任何事情都很方便嗎?
是的話，應該要這麼說
I feel everything in Taiwan is very convenient.

9.The good friend shares the worry and gives to support.
我會這樣寫
The good friend shares your worry and supports you.

10.I hope in the bread store work, because I love to eat the bread very much.
I hope to work in the breadstore because I love to eat the bread very much.

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