請幫我檢查文章文法是否有錯誤

Question

How to Improve Our Bad Habits

I think I’m a lazy person because I don’t like to do something that I don’t like.

I don’t like to study. It was boring to me, so I don’t like. I think learning a language

needs a lot of practice. For example, I can cultivate my mind by reading.

Sometimes I don’t want to go to school, because the weather is too hot or cold.

I have to improve it, but what can I do? Maybe I can take the bus.

On weekend, I have nothing to do. I can help my mom to so housework. I can wash

Dishes and often cook for my family.

If I can follow these steps, I think I’ll change my life.

Answer 1

How to Get Rid of Our Bad Habits?
get rid of 是捨棄的意思，improve 是指好的方面的改進。
I think I am a lazy person because I only do whatever I like.
whatever 取代了anything that
I don't like to study because it's boring to me.
In my opinion, learning language needs a lot of practice.
in my opinion 就我的觀點而言。language前面不用加冠詞。
Through reading, I can cultivate my mind.
Sometimes, I don't like to go to school because of the weather.
Then, I know I have to change it.
I may take bus to school when the weather is too hot or too cold.
On weekend, I can help my mother do housework, such as washing dishes and cooking for my family.
If I follow those tips, I think my life will be different.

Answer 2

目前只看到兩位回答者. 兩位的水準都不錯. 貓要注意以下的 run on sentence:

I don’t like to study because it is boring to me, I think learning a language
needs a lot of practice.

兩句中間只有一個逗點是不夠的. 要寫成:
I don’t like to study because it is boring to me, and I think learning a language needs a lot of practice.

2006-02-24 02:38:07 補充：
接著還是同一句的問題:
兩位回答者要記得 正統英文說法是
takes a lot of practice 不是 needs a lot of practice.

2006-02-24 02:39:34 補充：
其他的我沒時間看 要先去忙別的了...