My name is Louis I grautating form XXXXX , A late, I accomplish my military service and mustered out. I would I can find fit job for myself and study the work.
我的名字是louis，畢業於xxxxx，目前剛服完兵役退伍，希望能夠找到一份適合自已的工作，並且去研習這份工作
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因為怕面試時主管要個人的英文介紹，所以自已拼拼湊湊了一段簡短的自介，不知用法與文法語句上有沒有錯誤，希望能夠指導一下，謝~
2006-02-20 15:04:25 · 3 個解答 · 發問者 Louis 1 in 社會與文化 ➔ 語言
hi, 稍微改變一下會更好! 希望有幫助.
My name is Louis. I graduated from XXXCollege/University. I have just completed my military service recently. I hope to pursue a suitable career and devote myself to it.
2006-02-19 23:25:07 · answer #1 · answered by piggy 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
piggy 寫的不錯.
2006-02-21 00:39:46 · answer #2 · answered by yuvius1030 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
這樣ㄉ英文句子應該是沒錯ㄉ 念起來還滿通順ㄉ!!
2006-02-19 23:20:12 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋