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Last Friday was john`s birthday, his friends held a party to him, at first, they hid behind the sofa and waited John, then, gave john a surprise when he get back, finally, they ate birthday cake and sang birthday song together, John really had a good time with his friends.
2006-02-17 04:32:12 · 3 個解答 · 發問者 建龍 1 in 社會與文化 ➔ 語言
Last Friday was john`s birthday, his friends held a party to him, at first, they hid behind the sofa and waited John, then, gave john a surprise when he get back, finally, they ate birthday cake and sang birthday song together, John really had a good time with his friends.
Last Friday was John's birthday. His friend held aparty to him. At first, they hid behind sofa and waited for John. They were to give John a surprise when he got back. Finally, they sang a "happy birthday to you" song to John and shared the birthday cake together. John really had a good time with his friends.
妳不能把一整句全用逗點
2006-02-16 13:34:44 · answer #1 · answered by ? 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
when he getting back 要寫成
when he returned
或
when he went back.
要用過去式.
2006-02-23 22:38:03 · answer #2 · answered by yuvius1030 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Last Friday was john`s birthday, his friends held a party for him. At first, they hid behind the sofa and waited for John, and then gave john a surprise when he getting back. Finally, they ate birthday cake and sang birthday song together, John really had a good time with his friends.
我的程度只有這樣了
2006-02-16 12:39:06 · answer #3 · answered by 以翔 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋