請幫我看有錯嗎(尊重原文)
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Janice learned a lesson yesterday, that is she always do not obey her mother`s suggest to carry umbrella, so she caught cold in the rains yesterday, she was very uncomfortable On the bed all the day and did not dare to tell her mother, finally, her mother brought her to see a doctor , doctor suggested her did not go to school, and she needed rest on the bed and took a medicine.
我時式和詞性很弱 so 應該錯很多
2006-02-17 04:08:59 · 2 個解答 · 發問者 建龍 1 in 社會與文化 ➔ 語言
Janice learned her lesson yesterday. (Janice昨天學到了教訓）She didn't listen to her mother's suggestions as usual, and left home without carrying an umbrella. （像往常一樣，他沒有聽媽媽的建議，沒帶雨傘救出門了 - 因為是發生在昨天，所以都用過去式來表示） She caught a cold and felt sick all day long.（他感冒了，一整天都覺得不舒服） She dare not to tell her mother that she didn't feel good, but finally her mother found out and took her to a doctor.（他不敢跟他媽媽說他不舒服，但是媽媽還是發現了且帶他去看醫生） The doctor gave her some medicine and asked her to rest at home.（醫生給他藥並要求他在家好好休息）
2006-02-16 13:06:29 · answer #1 · answered by Julia C 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
沒錯, 你的過去式跟現在式常常出錯. 不過很欣慰的是, 你不像許多人直接將功課丟給別人翻譯. 習題要自己寫了請別人更正才會進步. 所以, 請繼續加油~
2006-02-23 22:42:07 · answer #2 · answered by yuvius1030 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋