(一)Several years ago, I lived with my grandma in Shin-Lin. One of my elder male cousins, Andy, was very naughty and created trouble frequently. When we began to get along with each other, I felt very terrible and even awful, as he loved to bully me.
(二) One day, Andy instigated me to play computer games. Everything was fine, but I overheard he told his parents that I had ruined computer. I was disappointed extremely. And my aunt was mad with me, yet I said nothing but crying. Before long, Andy felt sorry for betray to me, and he told the truth completely. Also he said sorry to me sincerely. Then I told him that I wasn’t offended with him, and I hoped him not to do it again. After he heard that, he was very regret. Finally, we made it up. The most important is that we became good friends.
(三) Sometimes, you might be betrayed by your siblings or friends. Still you can choose another way to solve it. Just be open-minded. Perhaps you will make “more” friends. Like me!
＊各位好心大大~這篇短文~請幫我修改錯誤的文法&單字&片語&時態~~
誠心的感謝你~~3Q~~^^
2006-02-05 20:49:45 · 3 個解答 · 發問者 薇安 1 in 社會與文化 ➔ 語言
Several years ago, I lived with my grandma in Shin-Lin. One of my elder male cousins, Andy, was very naughty and created trouble frequently. When we began to get along with each other, I felt very terrible and even "MORE AWFUL", as he loved to bully me.
One day, Andy "PERSUADED" me to play computer games. Everything was fine, but I overheard he told his parents that I had ruined computer. I was "EXTREMLY DISSAPPOINTED", "a"nd my aunt was mad "AT" me, yet I "DIDN"T SAY" nothing but "CRIED". Before long, Andy felt sorry for betray"ING" me, and he told the truth. Also he said sorry to me sincerely. Then I told him that I wasn’t offended with him, and I hoped him not to do it again. After he heard that, he was very regret. Finally, we made up. The most important is that we became good friends.
Sometimes, you might be betrayed by your siblings or friends. Still", "you can choose another way to solve it. Just be open-minded. Perhaps you will make “more” friends "l"ike me.
I deleted some extra words, and put in the right puntuations and the most satisfying word in quotations~
2006-02-05 22:14:03 · answer #1 · answered by ? 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
(一)Several years ago, I lived with my grandma in Shin-Lin. One of my elder male cousins, Andy, was very naughty and created trouble frequently. When we began to get along with each other, I felt very terrible and even awful, as he loved to bully me.
(二) One day, Andy instigated me to play computer games. Everything was fine, but I overheard him telling his parents that I had ruined the computer. I was extremely disappointed .My aunt was mad with me, yet I said nothing, though I cried. Before long, Andy felt sorry for betraying me, and he told the truth completely. Also, he said sorry to me sincerely. Then I told him that I wasn't offended by him, and I hoped he would not do it again. After he heard that, he was very regretful. Finally, we made up. The most important thing is that we became good friends.
(三) Sometimes, you might be betrayed by your siblings or friends. Still, you can choose another way to solve it. Just be open-minded. Perhaps you will make more friends. Like me!
2006-02-05 21:11:14 · answer #2 · answered by :::wAnDeReR fRoM mArS::: 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
各位大大~有些英文單字因換行而切斷~很傷眼力吧~敬請見諒唷~~3Q~~^^
2006-02-05 20:52:02 · answer #3 · answered by 薇安 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋