各位英文高手救我今天晚上就要!英文心得~!20點

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我這次的寒假作業!學校規定看一本關於希臘神話的書-我看The Gorgon\'s Head (http://angelcity.idv.tw/world/s31.htm) 英文的 光是翻譯我就花了不少時間 不巧的是 接下來幾天我有事 來不及寫心得 我自己有寫了一些 可是怪怪的!!!不嫌棄的話請您看看並幫我修正 我用很多時間才擠出這幾句 ((英文的 要200字以上不+標點符號))
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Book report
I read the book what is about Greece story in my winter vacation
There are seven stories.
One of the stories that I read was so brave and magical.
Perseus used the sharp sword with the speed of a flash of lightning
and the head of Gorgon Medusa fell from her body.
From now on, Danae need not fear the wicked King Polyesters ever again
All in all, I learned I had to brave and protect my parents and the story told us that brave can give you enough courage to do anything .

Answer 1

I read the book which is a Greece mythology in my winter vacation. There are seven stories in this book.
The hero in one of the stories that I read is so brave, and the story is fantastic.
The main character- Perseus chopped the head of Gorgon Medusa off by a sharp sword and with the speed of a flash of lightning .Since then, Danae doesn't have to be afraid of the wicked King Polyesters ever again.
All in all, I learned that I had to be brave and protect my parents and all those whom I love. And what the story told us is that love and faith can give us courage to do anything you set your mind to do. Love keeps the world go around, believe in faith. Whenever I'm confused, I ask myself "If you had one shot or one oppertunity, to seize everything you ever wanted. One moment. Would you capture it, or just let it slip?" This helped me do the right thing and gives meall the power that I need.
After all, all you need is to keep believing, though fears filled your heart, you know what's right to do.This book really inspired me a lot!


有些文法錯誤...修正過了...
(I'm not sure with my own grammar though...=_=|||)