請英文大師們幫我檢查一下我的文法好嗎～～

Question

這是我的作文～～我才國一可是可惡的老師要我們寫英文作文．．．
我只學了一點點英文．．．．．
請你們幫我看一下．．．不用改的太專業．．．．
謝謝你們~～～～題目是　ｍｙ　ｆａｍｉｌｙ

My Family

My name is Angel. I am twelve. I am a student. I like puppies but I don’t like kittens. I like purple and orange. There are six people in my family. Let me introduce you my family members.

My dad is Honey. He is fifty-two years old. He is a boss of a construction company. He is likes to watch TV. He likes black and brown. I like to play basketball with him.

My mom is May. She is forty-seven years old. She is a floralist. She likes flowers. She is in the Chinese Flower Design Association. She likes red and green. I like to chat with her.

My big sister is Stacy. She is twenty-five. She is an English teacher. She likes to eat, so she is very fat, but she is very cut and funny. She likes pink, and white.
I like to eat all kind of delicious food with her.

My second sister is Ann. She is a computer salesperson. She likes to go shopping. She likes brown. I like to go shopping with her.

My younger brother is Wen. He is a student, too. He likes fish especially dolphins. He likes blue. I like to read books and do homework with him.

I go shopping and have dinner with my family every weekend. I love them very

much and I wish we will be happy forever together.

Answer 1

我覺的很不錯啊~~~~你的英文比我好很多呢~~~~
以下是我看到，覺的怪怪的~~~~參考看看吧~~~~
He is likes to watch TV.====>第三人稱動詞加s，應該只要"likes"就ok了，你加了"is"…動詞就變成了有兩個了…
She is a floralist.====>floralist…你要說的是不是florist(花卉研究者)?因為好像沒有floralist這個字…
but she is very cut and funny.====>cut…你要表達的應該是cute對吧~~~~:D
I like to eat all kind of delicious food with her.====>kinds of foods…覺的你可能是要說"很多"食物…所以要加"s"表示複數哦~~~~:P
He likes fish especially dolphins.

2006-02-01 21:28:01 補充：
多打了一句…He likes fish especially dolphins. 這句我覺的是ok的啦~~~~也可以這樣用~~~~不過~~~~有不確定的還是問問一下老師吧~~~~也可以問你姐姐吧~~~~她不是英文老師嗎?

Answer 2

so和but不能在同句一起用

Answer 3

海豚是哺乳類, 不是魚類

Answer 4

雖然有些錯誤~不過國一ㄉ妳英文文法還不錯喔~