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This best way to learn foreign language is to input 1.{a lot of foreign language you want to master through listening and reading.}
Listening to the CD radio or even watch movies can help you to study correct 2.{pronunciation}.

And I prefer reading, which is much easier than listening, because I can see the spelling of every word, so you can look it up, with listening this is not always 3.{possible} .

When you find your own way to do, you should be enjoyable or select funny contents. This is a key to your 4.{progress}.

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1.
I think your idea to improve our foreign language is to listen and read a lot of information by the language to master. Is it correct?
If so, you should write the reasons why you think so or suggest some good ways. How can we improve our language ability though listening and reading?

2.
Only pronunciation?

3.
What do you want to say in this sentence?

4.
Can you find another way to improve your language ability? write down all your ideas.

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Answer 1

1. I think your idea to improve our foreign language is to listen and read a lot of information by the language to master. Is it correct?

1) If so, you should write the reasons why you think so or suggest some good ways.
The reasons are as follows:
* I am able to understand and communicate with others who are speaking this foreign language, which may become a benefit to my future career wither in trading business or in accounting.
* I can gain a lot of knowledge by being able to read a lot of Web pages written in a foreign language.
* I can consider immigrating to a country where people speak this foreign language.

2) How can we improve our language ability though listening and reading?
* I pay attention to listening, then I try to repeat the speaker’s words.
* I can learn a lot of vocabulary and usages by reading articles I’m interested.

2. Only pronunciation?
In additional to repeating to what a speaker says and reading articles, I would need to pay attention to my pronunciations. I have realized that a mispronounced word could be misunderstood.