請幫我看看這篇英文有啥錯誤~~

Question

I had had a necklace when I am in elementary school. Because I got a good grade, my mother decided to buy a necklace for me. It looks pretty and glistening with a pendant on it. It has a design of Mickey mouse, which is very cute. I am very cherish it and I wear it every day. But good time don't last long. One day, I played with my brother too excitedly, he pulled my necklace into two and it disappeared. I am very sad even now. I hope I could buy a necklace similar to that in the future, and then I will more cherish it.

Answer 1

I had had a necklace when I am in elementary school. Because I got a good grade, my mother decided to buy a necklace for me. It looks pretty and glistening with a pendant on it. It has a design of Mickey Mouse, which is very cute. I am very cherishing it and I wear it every day. But good times don’t last long. One day, I played with my brother too excitedly, he pulled my necklace into two and it disappeared. I am very sad even now. I hope I could buy a necklace similar to that in the future, and then I will more cherish it.

Answer 2

I had a necklace when I was in elementary school. My mother decided to get me a necklace, because I had good grades. It's very pretty with a glistening pendent on it. The pendent was a design of mickey mouse, it was very cute. Ｉcherish the necklace very much and wore it everyday.
But good times won't last, I was playing with my brother one day, we both got carried away and he pulled my necklace and it broke in half, and we couldn't find it. Even now i still feel sad, I hope that i can find a necklace similar to it in the future, and i will cherish it even more.

Answer 3

北北 ( 研究生 5 級 )；

你根本在說謊，你把發問者的原文一字不改的貼上去騙點數。請問，你會不會翻譯「無恥」這個詞？

快下知識家吧，我會追著你不放的。

Answer 4

唔,第一句怪怪的……應該是：I had a necklace when I was in elementary school.還有第二句的地方:grade用"成績"的意思的話,不可以是單數唷!所以應該是Because I got good grades,……。　大概就是這樣～