可以幫我檢查英文自傳嗎?-2

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因為字數太多, 所以這是延續上一篇的.....
I ever worked in a company as a drug analyst; my job was analyzing Morphine from urine by using GC/MS. So I also know how to operate and maintain a GC/MS. Then I worked in a manufacturing company as a product assayer. Because my boss thought I was circumspect, so I also was responsible for maintaining the ISO system and writing the ISO documents. Luckily, I helped my company to gain the license of ISO 9001:2000 in Jan. 2003.
Now I still work in an environment analysis company. My job is analyzing the VOCs in water and soil by using GC/ELCD-PID and GC/MC. I always work hard and do my best when I am in my job. In last January, I successfully helped my company to get the license of analyzing VOCs in soil, and also increased our business volume.
I am good at instrument analysis, especially GC and GC/MS. Although I don’t have high education but I always try to learn new things through any methods. I am optimistic and willing to do anything as possible as I can. My personality is introversive (內斂?) and down-to-earth. I always say the truth (有一份實力說一分話, 怎翻?). In future, I hope I can absolutely use my specialty in my job and I can enjoy my work.
I hope you will consider me for an interview. Thank you for reading my autobiography.

Yours faithfully,

Answer 1

I ever worked in a company as a drug analyst; my job was TO analyzE Morphine from urine by using GC/MS.
So I also know how to operate and maintain a GC/MS. 可以
Then I worked in a manufacturing company as a product assayer.可以
My boss BELIEVED THAT I COULD BE A circumspect, so I also was ASSIGNED TO maintain the ISO system and writE the ISO documents.
Luckily, I helped my company gain the license of ISO 9001:2000 in Jan. 2003.
Now I work WITH an environment analysis company.
My DUTY AT WORK is analyzing the VOCs in water and soil by using GC/ELCD-PID and GC/MC.
In last January, I successfully helped my company to get the license of analyzing VOCs in soil, and also TO EXTEND our business.
(TO BRING IN MORE CUSTOMERS INTO OUR BUSINESS)
I am good at DOING instrument analysis, especially GC and GC/MS.
Although I don’t have A high DEGREE LIKE A MASTER OR A PH.D, YET I AM A QUICK LEARNER.
I am optimistic and I AM willing to do MY JOB as MUCH as I can.
My personality is QUIET and down-to-earth.
I BELIEVE THAT MY EXCELLENT JOB PERFORMANCE WILL BE ABLE TO TELL THE TRUTH AND HOPEFULLY, I WILL BE ABLE TO BRING MY TALENTS INTO YOUR COMPANY.
PLEASE DO consider me for THE COMING interview.
ThankS for YOUR TIME. I LOOK FOWARD TO HEARING FROM YOU.
Yours faithfully,