可以幫忙檢查我的英文自傳嗎?-1

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如題, 因為是面試用, 所以請大家幫幫忙, 謝謝囉!
Dear Sir:
Thank you for giving me a chance to introduce me to you. I was born in a common family and I am the only child. Just because I don’t have any sisters and brothers, my parents always taught me to be independent and I am used to solve difficulty myself.
I graduated from National Cheng Kung University and my major was Chemistry. I am interested in doing various kinds of experiments. When I was a student, I studied every experiments included organic、inorganic、analysis and physical chemistry, etc. I think studying chemistry and doing experiments can help me to develop patience and independence.
After school, I worked in school as an assistant. My job was helping the professor to complete his research and to write the research report. When I was an assistant in school, I learned how to operate a GC、UV and IC, etc., and learned the skills of dealing with sample before instrument analysis. During this period, I knew how to design an experiment procedure and complete a report by myself.

Helen,
真是謝謝你了, 你幫我修的很好, 好感動..........
有一句你說不懂的是 " 我學到了樣品前處理的技巧" 不知如何翻?
還有一句我的本文" after school, Iworked in school as an assistant." 我是要說畢業後我在學校當研究助理, after classes 不是下課後的意思嗎?
再麻煩你一下囉! thanks a million! ^^

Answer 1

Dear Sir OR MADAMN:
Thank you for giving me SUCH aN OPPORTUNITY to introduce MYSELF.
I was born in a family WHERE I am the only child.
I don’t have any SIBLING, my parents HAVE always taught me to be independent.
THEREFORE I am used to FACING DIFFICULITES AND solvING PROBLEMS BY myself.
I graduated from National Cheng Kung University and my major was Chemistry. 可以
ONE OF MY interestS IS TO do various kinds of SCIENTIFIC experiments.
When I was a student, I studied A LOT OF SCIENCE RELATED TO organic、inorganic、analysis and physical chemistry, etc.
I think studying chemistry and doing SCIENTIFIC experiments can help me develop patience and independence.
** (help 後面接原形動詞)
After GRADUATION, I STARTED WORKING in THE school as an assistant.
My job was TO help the professor to complete his research and to write the research report.
When I was an assistant in school, I WAS TAUGHT how to operate SYSTEMS LIKE GC、UV and IC, etc., and learned the skills HOW TO PROCESS RAW MATERIAL sampleS before BEING SENT OUT FOR FURTHER instrument analysis. During this period, I knew how to design a procedure ON HOW TO DO AN EXPERIMENT and I HAVE completeD a WRITTEN report by myself.

有一句你說不懂的是 " 我學到了樣品前處理的技巧" 不知如何翻?
**(and learned the skills on how to process raw material samples.)
** 樣品前, 是否是未成型的樣品, 我是這樣想的啦

還有一句我的本文" after school, Iworked in school as an assistant." 我是要說畢業後
我在學校當研究助理, after classes 不是下課後的意思嗎?
** (After graduation, I started working in the school as an assistant.)
** After school是下課後, 我以為你的意思是那樣, 改成After classes只是不想和後面用的school重複
再麻煩你一下囉! thanks a million! ^^
** (Not a problem)

Answer 2

Dear Sir:
Thank you for giving me a chance to introduce myself to you. I was born in a common family and I am the only child. Because I didn’t have any sisters and brothers, my parents always asked me to be independent. Therefore, I usually solve problems by myself.
I graduated from National Cheng Kung University and I majored in Chemistry. I am interested in doing various kinds of experiments. When I was a student, I researched for a lot of experiments included organic, inorganic, analysis and physical chemistry, etc. I thought that studying chemistry and doing experiments can help me to develop patience and independence.
After school, I worked in school as an assistant. My job was helping the professor to complete his research and to write the research report. When I was an assistant in school, I learned how to operate a GC、UV and IC, etc.; learned the skills of dealing with sample before instrument analysis. After that, I knew how to design an experiment procedure and complete a report by myself. This is some simple introduction about me. Thanks for reading it.

Answer 3

親愛的先生︰ 謝謝你給我機會把我介紹給你。  我在一個普通家庭出生，我是獨生子女。  僅僅因為我沒有任何姐妹和兄弟 、我的父母總是教我獨立，我用來親自解決困難。 我從國立成功大學畢業，我的專業科目是化學。  我有興趣做各種各樣的實驗。  當我是一個學生時 、包括有機物,我研究每個實驗 、無生物 、分析和物理化學 、等等  我想學習化學，做實驗能幫助我發展忍耐和獨立。  下課後 、我作為一個助手在學校工作。  我的工作幫助教授完成他的研究並且寫研究報告。  當我是在學校的一個助手時 、我學習怎樣操作GC  、紫外線和IC  、等等 、並且學習在儀器分析之前處理樣品的技能。  在這個時期 、我知道怎樣設計一個實驗程式並且自己完成一份報告。