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Question

Stray days is a serious problem in Taiwan recently.
We can see some sick dogs they stray everywhere.
Although dogs are thought the loyalest friends for us, but we treat them in a cruel way.
We should find a way to solve the problem at the once.
At the first, we can prevent the female dogs to have babies.
If we do it, we can reduce the total of stray dogs.
Second, we have to take cake of the dogs which we have.
We can't desert them casually when don't like them.
At the last, if we find the stray dogs, we should call the government to deal with the problem.
If we do so, we can make our environment more better.


My father is a taxi driver.
Although he is already sixty years old, but he works hard every day.
The main reason is because he must make money to feel our family.
In fact, rain or shine, he always leaves home at six in morning and return, home at ten in evening.
Owing to he didn’t go to school when he was young, therefore, he has no knowledge.
In other words, he is illiteracy.
He doesn’t write his own name, not do mention read book.
But he knows knowledges is force. So he often asks us childs to do our best study hard.
In my opinion, he is perfect. Because he has gove a good example to us.
So from my point of view, he is perfect because he sets a good example for us.


It was an experience of myself last summer vacation, my family and I went traveling.
On our way home, when we crossed the corner but no traffic light, and there was a taxi from our left hand to bump into us.
Nobody can see it because its speed was too fast.
Fortunately, no one were hurt.
Although no body got. out cars were broken.
So I realized that it was not your mistake but others people maybe bump into you.
And, if you don't drive carefully, the accident may cause somebody to get hurt even die.
The importance of all, to wear a safety belt, whoever you are the driver or not.

Answer 1

Stray days is a serious problem in Taiwan recently.We can see some sick dogs they stray everywhere.Although dogs are thought the loyalest friends for us, but we treat them in a cruel way.We should find a way to solve the problem at the once.At the first, we can prevent the female dogs to have babies.If we do it, we can reduce the total of stray dogs.Second, we have to take cake of the dogs which we have.We can't desert them casually when don't like them.At the last, if we find the stray dogs, we should call the government to deal with the problem.If we do so, we can make our environment more better.My father is a taxi driver.Although he is already sixty years old, but he works hard every day.The main reason is because he must make money to feel our family.In fact, rain or shine, he always leaves home at six in morning and return, home at ten in evening. Owing to he didn’t go to school when he was young, therefore, he has no knowledge. In other words, he is illiteracy. He doesn’t write his own name, not do mention read book. But he knows knowledges is force. So he often asks us childs to do our best study hard. In my opinion, he is perfect. Because he has gove a good example to us.So from my point of view, he is perfect because he sets a good example for us.It was an experience of myself last summer vacation, my family and I went traveling. On our way home, when we crossed the corner but no traffic light, and there was a taxi from our left hand to bump into us. Nobody can see it because its speed was too fast.Fortunately, no one were hurt. Although no body got. out cars were broken. So I realized that it was not your mistake but others people maybe bump into you. And, if you don't drive carefully, the accident may cause somebody to get hurt even die. The importance of all, to wear a safety belt, whoever you are the driver or not. 寫的很好!!

Answer 2

拜託喔, 這是考試題目
當然是寫得很好啦