老師要我們寫一篇outline,Topic為My favorite delicious cake,之前我寫的不好已經被老師退兩次報告了,拜託各位能給我個指點嗎? 因為還要忙很多期末報告跟作業...感激不盡
2006-01-02 17:39:00 · 3 個解答 · 發問者 Sky 2 in 社會與文化 ➔ 語言
1. My favorite delicious cake is carrot cake. It contains raisins, but doesn't taste too sweet. The cake is not too heavy, so I can have it after dinner.
2. My mother usually goes to the nearby bakery to buy the cake on Sunday afternoon. We cut the cakes into pieces. I put my piece of cake into the microwave for 15 seconds. The cake tastes much better when it's luckwarm.
3. I would like to learn how to bake a carrot cake, and I start reading cooking books.
4. One day, I will own a bakery just to sell my favorite carrot cakes.
2006-01-02 20:14:00 · answer #1 · answered by helen 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
luckwarm 應該是luke warm 吧.
I start reading cooking books 應該是I startED to read cooking books.
2006-01-20 07:21:20 · answer #2 · answered by WT 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
你要五段式寫作的嗎?
老實講...這題目還真是圈圈叉叉
我舉例好了，你看你能不能理解
第一段: chocolate cake
第二段: chocolate is my favorite
第三段: romantic/sweet/lovers
第四段: kinds of chocolate cakes and chocolate's leval of cakes
第五段: (conclution)結合上述的做一小句話，ending就是I really like chocolate cakes. It's my favorite!
不曉得這樣好不好，你看看吧~好自為之
2006-01-02 18:38:20 · answer #3 · answered by 婉婷 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋