求助英文履歷表

Question

Although I am still a college student,雖然我還是個大學生

my professional job experience is necessarily limited
所以專業上的工作經驗的確很有限

I am very interested in this position,and believe that my employment
background is appropriate for the position
我對這個職務相當感到興趣 也深信我的工作背景非常適合這個職位

I am sure that the combination of my strong interest and education to excel will make me an asset to your marketing department
相信結合我濃厚的興趣.工作經驗以及所學.定能為貴公司效力

Enclosed is a copy of my resume,which more fully details my qualifications for the position .
附件是我的履歷表 裡面對的的申請資格有詳細的說明

I look forward to rcceiving your reply.Thank you for your time and consideration
期待收到您的回覆 也謝謝您的時間與思考
ps:拜託各位高手幫我完成英文履歷表我自己查到的句子只有這些了
謝謝你們

Answer 1

Although I am still a college student,my professional job experience is necessarily limited.
這一句文法錯誤.如果用Although,下面要用反句.如:Although I am still a college student,my professional job experiences are NOT limited.
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I am sure that the combination of my strong interest and education to excel will make me an asset to your marketing department
不需要 to excel,因為加了以後看不懂.正確應該是I am sure that the combination of my strong interest and education will make me an asset to your marketing department
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Enclosed is a copy of my resume,which more fully details my qualifications for the position
應該改成Enclosed is a copy of my resume,which will fully detail my qualifications for the position (把detail當動詞)
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I look forward to rcceiving your reply.Thank you for your time and consideration
應該改成I look forward receiving your reply.Thank you in advance for your time and consideration

就這樣,Hope this helps! Good luck!