She is a great all-directions entertainer.
She was born in octorber 29th I 1969.
She is a easy-going and out-going guy.
Her hoppies is collect candles.
She favorite colors are white and blue.
She afraid of sakes.
She entered the show business at 1990.
And published the first album.
She had already enterd the show business for 15years.
She obtained “the Best host’s prize “in1998.
And managed the gold Melody Awards for 7 years continuously.
She just get married with Li Ren Li.
Now,she is gregnant with her first child.
So,she is very happies.
請各位英文達人幫我看看文法有沒有哪裡錯誤
謝謝
2005-12-27 18:31:19 · 5 個解答 · 發問者 Anonymous in 社會與文化 ➔ 語言
真是太太太感謝各位的回答...
心中有著無限的感激...
但請各位將你的回答PO到回答問題裡
那我才可以把你們選為最佳回答唷~~~
2005-12-27 19:14:39 · update #1
Jin~~~請你將你的回答PO上來喔~~~
因為我很想把分數給你~~~
2005-12-27 19:24:50 · update #2
She is a great all-directions entertainer. 可以
She was born on octorber 29th, 1969. 日期前面要用介係詞on
She is an easy-going and out-going girl. (easy前面用an, she最好是girl在後面)
Her hoppies is to collect candles. 兩個動詞中間要用to來連接
Her favorite colors are white and blue. 第一個字改成Her
She is afraid of sakes. 要加be動詞
She entered the show business in 1990.年份前面要用介係詞 in
And she published the first album.少了主詞 she
She had already enterd the show business for 15years.可以
She obtained the prize as "the Best host" in 1998.改這樣比較好
And she managed the gold Melody Awards for 7 years in a row.少了主詞 she, 改最後一個字
She just got married with Li Ren Li. 改過去式
Now, she is pregnant with her first child.改錯字
So, she is very happy. 最後那個字是錯字
2005-12-27 22:09:16 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
1. 全方位直譯成all-directions 是行不通的，不如用talented代替
2.October 29 in 1969
4.Her hobby is to collect candles.
5.Her favorite colors
6.She is afraid of snakes.
7.She entered the showbiz and released her first album in 1990.
8.She has been in the showbiz for 15 years.
9.She "got" 就好，obtained跟其他句子裡的用字是太過正式。
10. She has been the winner of "Gold Melody Awards" for 7 years.
11. She just got married with Li Ren Li.
12. Now, she's pregnant, so she is happy. 要強調懷第一個小孩的話可以考慮用：She's having her first child, so she is happy.
2005-12-27 19:51:36 · answer #2 · answered by 黃尖 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
1) She is a easy-going and out-going guy.
easy-going前面要是an而不是a...
guy指的是男生﹐那為什么要用she呢﹖
描述一個人的個性的時候﹐最好後面用person. 所以這句話要改成She is an easy-going and out-going person.
2) Her hoppies is collect candles.
hoppies是複數﹐所以要用are. collect要用collecting. 所以這句話要改成her hoppies are collecting candles.
2005-12-28 00:08:11 補充：
3) She afraid of sakes.
這句要改成she is afraid of sakes.
4) She entered the show business at 1990.
1990指的是年份﹐所以前面不能用at...
這句要改成she entered the show business in 1990.
5) And published the first album.
the要改成her.這句要改成and published her first album.
2005-12-28 00:10:45 補充：
6) She had already enterd the show business for 15years.
這句話要改成She has already enterd the show business for 15 years.
7) She just get married with Li Ren Li.
married是過去式﹐前面就要用got.
這句話要改成She just got married with Li Ren Li.
2005-12-28 00:12:18 補充：
8) Now,she is gregnant with her first child.
pregnant...
9) So,she is very happies.
so不要隨便用﹐這種情況下最好用therefore. happy拼錯...這句話要改成therefore, she is very happy.
2005-12-27 19:04:56 · answer #3 · answered by Jin 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
抱歉不知中文
但就英文而言
錯誤不少，如倒數第一行的happy
倒數第二行的pregnant....
2005-12-27 19:02:33 · answer #4 · answered by Joey Lee 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
英文中間不要大寫..
數字要用英文拼音..
沒神麼大錯誤啦..
喵估~
2005-12-27 18:34:29 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋