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Question

Believed each person in belongs to in own idle timesalways had some thing like to do it How do you killing these leisurely times? In my idle times, I most like looking at the comic and the novel Starts to uses this way to pass my leisurely times Is from studied five grades and affects me is my sister I originally occasionally look that
Now it already becames my indispensable things But I am not each kind of novel and the comic all accepts I hate that horrow or violence's plot and sorrowful's I also repel How do you kill these section of idle time? However,so long as own like to doing things does not affect other people I thought, this is the most suitable idle time!!

中文意思:
相信每個人在屬於自己的空閒時間中，總有一些自己喜歡做的事！！你是如何打發這段悠閒的時光呢？？
在我的空閒時間裡，我最喜歡看漫畫及小說．會開使用這種方式來度過我的悠閒時光，是從小五開始，而影響我的便是姐姐，我由原本的偶爾看，到現在，它已經成為我生活中不可或缺的必需品！！但我並不是每種小說和漫畫都看的，我討厭以恐怖或者暴力為主的劇情，而悲劇的書我也是相當排斥的！！
你是怎麼打發這段空閒時間呢？？不管如何，只要是自己喜歡做的事，而不影響其它人，我想，這便是最適當的空閒時間！！

這是我同學學妹問的 拜託幫個忙喔!~順便看看大家是怎麼改地^^~~謝~~~謝~~~

Answer 1

Everybody likes to do things of their own during their spare time. How
do you spend your free time? I like to read comics and novels for fun.
Influenced by my sister, I started to acquire the interest since I was
a fifth grader.Now
it became one of the indispensable things in my life. However, not all
of the comics and novels fit my taste, I have my own preference.
Horror, sad, or violent genre are not in my league. I believe
if the hobbie does not hurt anybody, and it gives you enjoyable moment,
then it is a good hobbie. How about you? Do you have a good hobbie?-------------------------------------因為要翻的順暢 所以許到小地方都改了 不過整體不會離你的原意太遠

2005-12-21 00:58:38 補充：
沒問題了 這篇翻譯可以讓他過關 沒問題的

2005-12-27 13:35:54 補充：
沒關係

Answer 2

謝謝你们喔~~我最近沒時間上網

Answer 3

Everybody do things they like in their own spare time. How do you spend your free time? I like to read comics and novels for fun. Influenced by my sister, I started to acquire the interest since I was a fifth grader.

Now it became one of the things I can not live without. However, not all of the comics and novels fit my taste, I have my own preference. Horror, sad, or violent genre are not in my league.

I believe if the hobbie does not hurt anybody, and it gives you enjoyable moment, then it is a good hobbie. How about you? Do you have a good hobbie?

Answer 4

你的文章基本上是翻譯網頁的譯文,坦白說我看不太懂, 介意把原文po出來對照嗎?