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2. One day, I went home and into the elevator, I met a handsome guy. At that time, I fart. The fart also makes a little sound and a bad smell . Then the elevator stops on the fifth floor and four people come in. I just want to kill myself. I don’t want to see them again. Though the handsome
guy pretend never heard that. But I still feel embarrassed.
2005-12-13 01:35:46 · 2 個解答 · 發問者 Niyu 2 in 社會與文化 ➔ 語言
麻煩大家幫我修改英文作文One day, I went home and into the elevator, I met a handsome guy. At that time, I fart. The fart also makes a little sound and a bad smell . Then the elevator stops on the fifth floor and four people come in. I just want to kill myself. I don't want to see them again. Though the handsome guy pretend never heard that. But I still feel embarrassed. On my way home one day, I met a handsome guy. While we were in the elevator, I farted. It made a small sound with a bad smell. The elevator then stopped on the fifth floor and four more people came in. I just wanted to kill myself. Though the handsome guy pretended never hear or smell it, I was so embarrassed I never want to face these people ever again.
2005-12-13 02:13:53 · answer #1 · answered by bc 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
One day, when I was on my way home, I went into the elevator, met a good-looking guy, and I farted in the elevator. The fart made a quite little sound and stink. Then the elevator stopped at the fifth floor and four people walked in the the elevator. I just wanted to kill myself. I so don't want to see them again. Although the good-looking guy pretended that he knew nothing about the fart, I still felt embarrasing.
2005-12-13 04:17:11 · answer #2 · answered by Vivi 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋