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Question

Oh! Yes! We had BBQ and a...
Hoo..I don`t know how to describe it.
Have u do that before? Or saw that?
It`s kind like a kiln underground.
First we dig a small hole in a fallow field.
Then we start to put clods around it.
Like a small castle.
When we cover over it.
We start to put slice of woods into.

And burn!

Until the clods become black.
We break the small castle.
Then put the foods in it.
Cover it with soil.
And the last things.
Wait! Dig! and eat!

喔！是啊！我們有BBQ跟...
嗯！我不知道怎麼形容它。
你有做過或是看過嗎？
有點像是地底的窯爐。
我們先挖個小洞在休耕的田上。
然後我們開始繞著它堆放土塊，
有點像是個小城堡，
當我們覆蓋完之後，
我們開始放木材在裡面

然後燃燒！

直到土塊變黑
我們毀掉這個城堡，再放食物進去，用土覆蓋他。
而最後的事，等待！挖掘！吃！

Answer 1

Oh! Yes! We had BBQ and a...Hoo..I don`t know how to describe it.Have u done that before? Or at least seen someone doing so?It`s kind of like making an underground-oven.First we find an open space and make a hole on the field,then we surround the hole with clods and stones; eventually, it will look like a small castle.After underground-oven is built, we would slide in a few pieces of woods to help making the fire.Fire it up!When clods and stones turn into black which means the oven is ready to cook, we will intentionally make it collapse, put foods in, and use soil to cover the food. Using the remaining heat to do the rest of the cooking.At last, BBQ is ready! We dig the food out and enjoy the meal.