幫忙糾正這篇英文短劇的錯誤~謝謝~

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這是我們的英文短劇劇本~
可不可以幫我看看哪裡文法單字出錯~
還有幫忙翻中文部分~謝謝~!感激不盡~
(英文不好...見笑嚕...)

Can you tell me how can I get to the National Palace Museum ?

旁白 : Tomato 問路者 : Chu 路人 : Ying & Wei

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One day , there is a foreigner standing infront of the bus stop .

Chu : How can I get to the National Palace Museum ? ( 沉思中… )
( Ying 經過 )
Chu : Excuse me ~ How can I get to the National Palace Museum ? Can you
tell me ?
Ying : Oh ~ You can take the bus 213 .
( Bus 213 經過 ~ )
( Chu get on the bus ~ )

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And then she start up her journey successfully …

( She get down the bus at one stop … )
Chu : Ohoh … Where is the National Palace Museum ? Let me ask someone else …
( Wei 經過 )
Chu : Excuse me ~ How can I get to the National Palace Museum ? Can you
give me a brief and a precise answer ?
Wei : OK ! Make a right here . Then you will see a traffic light . Then go ahead for three blocks . Then you will get it ! Have a nice day ~
Chu : Thank you ! ^^

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就這樣 Chu 終於到達 National Palace Museum ! 並過了一個充實和知性的一天 !

啊~~很感謝"指甲油"跟"chiate"兩位~!!
可是一定要選一個最佳解答... "

Answer 1

Can you tell me how I can get to the National Palace Museum? Narrator: Tomato; Foreigner: Chu; Passersby: Ying and Wei One day, there is a foreigner standing infront of the bus stop. Chu: How can I get to the National Palace Museum? (Thinking to herself) (Ying passes by) Chu: Excuse me. Could you tell me how to get to the National Palace Museum? Ying: Oh, you can take (   ) bus 213. (Bus 213 passes by) (Chu gets on the bus) Thus, she begins her journey successfully...(She gets off the bus at one stop...) Chu: Oh oh... Where is the National Palace Museum? Let me ask someone (   )... (Wei passes by) Chu: Excuse me. Could you tell, brief and precisely, how to get to the National Palace Museum?Wei: Sure! Make a right here, and you will see a traffic light.  Go (   ) three blocks,  and you are there! (   ) Chu: Thank you very much! Have a nice day. (   ) Chu finally arrived at National Palace Museum! She had a great day filled with fun and leaning!

Answer 2

Can you tell me how can I get to the National Palace Museum ?  Aside : Persons who ask the way of Tomato : Chu passerby : Ying & Wei   ** One day, there is a foreigner standing infront of the bus stop.  Chu : How can I get to the National Palace Museum ?  (While pondering    ) (Ying passes  ) Chu : Excuse me ~ How can I get to the National Palace Museum ?  Can you  tell me ?  Ying : Oh ~ You can take the bus 213 .  (Bus 213 passes ~)     ( Chu get on the bus ~ ) ** And then she start up her journey successfully      ( She get down the bus at one stop     ) Chu : Ohoh Where is the National Palace Museum ?  Let me ask someone else    (Wei passes  ) Chu : Excuse me ~ How can I get to the National Palace Museum ?  Can you  give me a brief and a precise answer ?  Wei : OK !  Make a right here .  Then you will see a traffic light .  Then go ahead for three blocks .  Then you will get it !  Have a nice day ~  Chu : Thank you !  ^ ^   ** In this way Chu reached National Palace Museum at last!  And one is substantial and one day of knowing!