(急件20點)英文翻譯修改問題

Question

這是我自己翻的但是有些怎麼看都不對
請英文好的大大幫我修正一下~~謝謝~~感激不盡
中翻英
我們必須把自己視為是大宇宙的一部份
We must regard as oneself are a big universe part
太陽是太陽系的中心
The sun is solar system's center
只要有可能他們就跟隨地標
So long as has the possibility They follow the terrestrial reference
研究已經證實大部分的小型鳥類在夜間遷徙
The research already confirmed the majority of small birds move in at night
大部分的海豚很害羞並且保持距離
The majority of porpoises are very shy and the maintenance distance
有時候一個我們偶然認識的動物能代表其他數以億計我們無法認識的動物
Some time we accidentally knew the animal can represent the animal which other counted by the 100 million we is unable to know
那不是真的
That’s not true
這使我快樂
This make me happy
他最近看起來快樂多了
He recently looked like joyfully is many
跟我跳舞吧
Dance with me
妳知道我的夢想是什麼嗎
You know what is my dream
妳就快結婚了
You’ve got married
妳要對人們顯示出你關心
You must demonstrate to the people you cared about
小女孩,你真有福氣
Little girl, you really have the good fortune

英翻中
It’s your heart of gold I love the best.

One has to be fair and very honest
你必須是公正和非常誠實的
Initially, instinct points them in the right direction
最初地, 本能指向他們在正確的方面
Other people lose it .we’re supposed to find it.
別人失去它。我們應該發現它
People look up to us ,and we are held to higher standards of behavior.
人們看我們決定,而且我們被拿著對行為更高的標準。
Whatever choice you make ,let it come from your heart.
不管你做出任何選擇,讓他發自你的心
Will you , in your power ,cause law and justice and mercy to be executed in all
Judgments
你會在你的力量,導致法律和正義和慈悲在所有的批判下被執行
Knowledge replaced ignorance.
知識會取代無知
Science ended superstition
科學終止了迷信
Our sense of wonder never ends
我們了解奇蹟永遠不會終止
Courage is not the absence of fear ,but rather the judgment that something else is
more important than fear
勇氣不是缺乏恐懼,但寧可評斷, 其他比恐懼重要
They labor to cover about 100 miles a day
他們每天努力行走大約100 英哩
Radar studies have also disclosed flight or in greater number than birds
雷達研究透露了飛機或比鳥更加了不起的數字
In the thundering darkness of the storm waits the promise of the rainbow
在打雷的黑暗中風暴等待彩虹的諾言

Answer 1

我們必須把自己視為是大宇宙的一部份
We must regard ourself as a part in the big universe.
太陽是太陽系的中心
The sun is the center of the solar system.
只要有可能他們就跟隨地標
They will trace the land marks whereever possible.
研究已經證實大部分的小型鳥類在夜間遷徙
It has been proved that most of the small size birds migrate at night.
大部分的海豚很害羞並且保持距離
Most dolphines are very shy and keep distance from people.
有時候一個我們偶然認識的動物能代表其他數以億計我們無法認識的動物
Some time, an animal that we encounted by accident may represent billions of other animals that we do not recognize.
那不是真的
That’s not real.
這使我快樂
This makes me happy.
他最近看起來快樂多了
He looked much happier recently.
跟我跳舞吧
Would you like to dance with me?
妳知道我的夢想是什麼嗎
Do you know what my dreaming is?
妳就快結婚了
You’re going to be married.
妳要對人們顯示出你關心
You have to show people that you care.
小女孩,你真有福氣
Hi littlegirl, you are a lucky one.

英翻中
It’s your heart of gold I love the best.
你善良的心地是我的最愛
One has to be fair and very honest
做人必須正直與非常誠實
Initially, instinct points them in the right direction
最初, 直覺將他們導往正確方面
Other people lose it .we’re supposed to find it.
別人失去的，我們應該把它找到
People look up to us ,and we are held to higher standards of behavior.
由於人們尊敬我們,我們應該秉持更高的行為標準。
Whatever choice you make ,let it come from your heart.
不管你做任何選擇都要發自真心。
Will you , in your power ,cause law and justice and mercy to be executed in all
Judgments
你是否願意用你的力量,使法律、正義與慈悲在所有的法律判決中得以伸張？Knowledge replaced ignorance.
知識會戰勝無知。
Science ended superstition
科學可以破除迷信。
Our sense of wonder never ends
我們好奇的天性永遠不會消失。
Courage is not the absence of fear ,but rather the judgment that something else is
more important than fear
勇氣並非無懼，而是認為我們有比畏懼更重要之事。
They labor to cover about 100 miles a day
他們勉力行走了約100 英哩。
Radar studies have also disclosed flight or in greater number than birds
雷達研究也披露了比鳥類飛行更多的飛行。
In the thundering darkness of the storm waits the promise of the rainbow
在雷電交加的暗夜風雨中，我們靜候彩虹終將到來的承諾。

Answer 2

Chinese to English~
1. 我們必須把自己視為大宇宙的一部分
--We must regard yourself as a part in the giant universe.
2.太陽是太陽系的中心
--The sun is central in the solar system.
3.只要有可能他們就跟隨地標
They will follow the terrestrial reference as it could be possible.
4.研究已經證實大部分的小型鳥類在夜間遷徙
--The research has confirmed that mostly small birds move in the night.
5.大部分的海豚很害羞並且保持距離
--Most dolphins are very shy and keep their distance.
6.有時候一個我們偶然認識的動物能代表其他數以億計我們無法認識的動物
--Sometimes we know an animal by accident, and it represents that we don't know billions of others.
7.那不是真的(這題答對了!^^)
--That's not true.
8.這使我快樂
--This (thing/ item) makes me happy.
9.他最近看起來快樂多了
--He looks happier recently.
10.跟我跳舞吧
--Dance with me.(這樣也行~^^)
--Go dancing with me.
11.妳知道我的夢想是什麼嗎?
--Do you know what my dream is?
(what是代名詞 後面+子句)
12.妳就快結婚了
--You are going to/ will be married.
13.妳要對人們顯示出你關心
--You must demonstrate your concerns for those people.
14.小女孩,你真有福氣
--Little girl, you really have a good fortune.
--Little girl, you actually get such fortune.
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English to Chinese
1.It's your heart of gold I love the best.
--你的金心是我的最愛(應該是說:你的心是我最愛的寶藏吧@@"?)
2.One has to be fair and very honest
--人至少要公正且誠實的
3.Initially, instinct points them in the right direction
--一開始, 本能/天性就將他們指向正確的路
4.Other people lose it , we're supposed to find it.
--別人失去的我們要設法找出來 (把握良機)
5.Whatever choice you make, let it come from your heart.
--做出發自內心的決定
6.Will you, in your power, cause law and justice and mercy to be executed in all
Judgments.
--在你下決心的力量下, 可在裁决中發現法律.公正和仁慈
7.Knowledge replaced ignorance.
--知識取代無知
8.Science ended superstition.(恭喜啊~答對囉^^)
--科學終止了迷信
9.Our sense of wonder never ends
--我們的驚奇感從不消失/停止 (就是每分每秒都會感到驚奇啊!= =|||)
10.Courage is not the absence of fear, but rather the judgment that something else is
more important than fear
--勇氣不是缺乏恐懼, 到不如說是恐懼根本不算什麼
11.They labor to cover about 100 miles a day.(哇~厲害喔@@)
--他們每天努力行走大約100英哩
12.Radar studies have also disclosed flight or in greater number than birds
--雷達的調查透露出飛機的數量遠遠超過鳥群
13.In the thundering darkness of the storm waits the promise of the rainbow
--在極大的黑暗風暴中等待希望的彩虹
that's all~

Answer 3

英翻中
We must regard ourselves as a part of the universe.
The sun is the center of solar syatem.
They follow landmarks when possible.
The research has prove that most small birds flit at night.
Most dolphins are shy and keep distance with people.
Sometimes an animal that we meet by accident can represent other millions of animals which we are unable to know.
That's not true.
This makes me happy.
He seem happier recently.
Dance with me.
Do you know what my dream is?
You are about to get married.
You have to show people that you care.
Little girl,you really has a good fortune.
中翻英
It’s your heart of gold I love the best.
我愛的是你那如黃金般的心
One has to be fair and very honest
一個人必須是公平和非常誠實的
Initially, instinct points them in the right direction
最初, 本能指給他們正確的方向
Other people lose it .We're supposed to find it.
別人失去它。我們應該發現它
People look up to us ,and we are held to higher standards of behavior.
人們看我們決定,而我們被提升到更高的行為標準
Whatever choice you make ,let it come from your heart.
不管你做出任何選擇,讓它發自你的心
Will you , in your power ,cause law and justice and mercy to be executed in all
udgments
你會在你的力量之下造成法律.正義和慈悲在所有的審判下被執行
Knowledge replaced ignorance.
知識會取代無知
Science ended superstition
科學終止了迷信
Our sense of wonder never ends
我們的想像力永遠不會終止
Courage is not the absence of fear ,but rather the judgment that something else is
more important than fear
勇氣不是沒有恐懼,但不如判斷, 有些事比恐懼重要
They labor to cover about 100 miles a day
他們每天努力行走大約100 英哩
Radar studies have also disclosed flight or in greater number than birds
雷達研究透露了飛機比鳥更加了不起的數字
In the thundering darkness of the storm waits the promise of the rainbow
在雷聲隆隆的黑暗中的暴風雨等待著彩虹的承諾

2005-11-11 20:05:38 補充：
中翻英的第二個句子的最後一個單字是"system"