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Question

After watch this movie, I found that Mary and Colin have something in common. Both of them lack of parent’s attention, and they don’t have friends. No one cares about them. People they often get along with are servants. They rely on them too much, so they think a lot of works they can’t do it by themselves. For example, Mary wants Martha to help her to wear clothes. When things are not going as they wish, they would get angry, and servants dare not to break their orders. They do what they want. It will be spoil them easily, and result in have ill-tempered.

Answer 1

After watching this movie, I found that Mary and Colin have something in common. Both of them lack parental attention, and they don’t have friends. No one cares about them. People they often get along with are servants. They rely on them so much that they can't do anything by themselves. For example, Mary wants Martha to help her to put her clothes on. When things are not going as they wish, they (    ) get angry, and the servants dare not to break their orders. They do what Mary and Colin want. This spoils them (    ), and Mary and Colin have become ill-tempered.

Answer 2

1. After watch-After watching
2. so they think a lot of works they can’t do it by themselves ---so they think they can't do lots of works by themselves.--- or---so there are lots of things they don't think they can do by themselves.
3. When things are not going as they wish, they would get angry, and servants dare not to break their orders. ---拆成兩句
4. It will be spoil them easily, and result in have ill-tempered. ---They will be spoiled easily and having ill-tempered. --- or--- It spoils them easily and results in having ill-tempered.

Answer 3

開頭應是After watching the movie......
最後有一句應是result in having.......