1. There were three classmates came to see me yesterday.2. Although our trousers were wet when we got home, we don't care.3. Everywhere can see beautiful flowers on the campus.4. When I went to her home she left for London.5. I could ask my mother to give me some money when I left for Birmingham, but I did not.請提出需要補充或更正的地方,稍微解釋一下。
2005-10-23 23:04:59 · 6 個解答 · 發問者 Anonymous in 社會與文化 ➔ 語言
1. There were three classmates came to see me yesterday.
改成 Three classmates came to see me yesterday. 即可
2. Although our trousers were wet when we got home, we don't care.
前半句是過去式,所以 do也要改成 didn't‧
3. Everywhere can see beautiful flowers on the campus.
改成 Beautiful flowers on campus can be seen everywhere.即可
4. When I went to her home she left for London.
改成 When I went her home, she had left for London
5. I could ask my mother to give me some money when I left for Birmingham, but I did not.
I could (have asked) my mother to give me some money when I left for Birmingham, but I did not.
需用完成式‧
2005-10-23 23:14:34 · answer #1 · answered by ken 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
1. There were three classmates came to see (or visit) me yesterday.
2. Although our trousers were wet when we got home, we don't mind.
3. We can see beautiful flowers on the campus everywhere.
4. When I went to her home, she had left for London.
5. I should have asked my mother to give me some money when I left for Birmingham.
2005-10-24 13:39:00 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
ken 跟 meowwwwwww 兩人都翻得不錯
2005-10-24 06:18:09 · answer #3 · answered by yuvius1030 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
2. Although our trousers were wet when we got home, but we did not care.
3. there is no S.
ex:
Beautiful flowers can be seen everywhere on the campus.
You can see beautiful flowers on the campus.
4. I am not sure what you want to say...
ex: She left for London when I sent to her place.
2005-10-24 03:41:47 · answer #4 · answered by ? 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
1. There were three classmates that came to see me yesterday. 2. Although our trousers were wet when we got home, we didn't care.3. Beautiful flowers can be seen everywhere on the campus.4. When I went to her home, she had already left for London.5. I could have asked my mother to give me some money when I left for Birmingham, but I did not.
2005-10-24 00:28:59 · answer #5 · answered by meowwwwwww 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
我有修正的地方有用雙引號標示 請參考一下唷 ^^
1. There were three classmates came to see me yesterday.
--> There were three classmates "come" to "visit" me yesterday.
拜訪要用visit 不能用 see
2. Although our trousers were wet when we got home, we don't care.
--> Although our trousers were wet when we got home, we "didn't" care.
過去式應一致
3. Everywhere can see beautiful flowers on the campus.
--> "There are beautiful flowers everywhere" on the campus.
到處都有花 到處為地方副詞不能直接當主詞
4. When I went to her home she left for London.
--> When I went to her home, she "had left" for Londan.
當我到她家的時候 她已經離開去倫敦了 後一句應用過去完成式表達較為妥當
5. I could ask my mother to give me some money when I left for Birmingham, but I did not.
2005-10-23 23:17:05 · answer #6 · answered by ? 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋