中翻英(一篇短文)急!!!!!20點哦

Question

請各位大大幫我中翻英.短文如下:

我今天要說的就是我親身的經驗.在我國小4年級的暑假期間.
由於數學很差.一直考不好.於是媽媽就與老師聯絡.老師也希望
能幫我加強數學.就通知媽媽隔天帶我去學校幫我加強.隔天一早.
我到學校時.因為當時是暑假.學校沒有什麼人.我也沒和老師
約地點.於是就走到老師辦公室那條走廊的轉角.老師就突然
從背後叫住我.跟我招手.要我從反方向跟去.走了幾秒鐘之後.
老師就突然從辦公室出現.跟我說:你要去哪?我馬上回頭.
之後又轉頭回去看時.那相同叫住我的人已經不見了.我心裡想:
不會吧!這麼神奇.至今我還是不肯相信那是我的幻覺

給: chiate
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.所以下面有一個網址.是相同的題目與20點.
你們把答案轉貼過去.這樣我就能各自分開選你們
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Answer 1

Today I'm going to tell you my personal experience that happened during the summer vacation of my fourth grade. My math grades were not great, mom asked my teacher to give me some extra lessons and my teacher agreed, he asked mom to take me to school on the next morning. When I arrived at school on the next morning, there were hardly anyone at school since summer vacation was on. I forgot to ask my teacher for a meeting place so I went straight to his office. On the corner of the hall to his office, I heard him/her calling me and asked me to follow him/her; within a few seconds, He/she walked out of his/her office and asked me where I was going, I turned to my teacher's voice straight away. When I looked back, the person who called me has disappeared. I thought to myself: "That's not right, it's a bit supernatural." Till this day I still couldn't believe that was merely my imagination.

Answer 2

我今天要說的就是我親身的經驗.
What I like to talk about today is my own experience.
在我國小4年級的暑假期間.
During the summer vacation of my 4th grade of primary school,
由於數學很差.一直考不好.於是媽媽就與老師聯絡.老師也希望
Due to my poor math and bad grade, Thus, my mother contact teacher and he agree to
Assist me to improve my math.
就通知媽媽隔天帶我去學校幫我加強.
He told my mother to bring me to school next day so he can help me improve
隔天一早. 我到學校時.因為當時是暑假.學校沒有什麼人.我也沒和老師
約地點.於是就走到老師辦公室那條走廊的轉角
Next day, when I arrive at school, because it was still summer vacation, not too many people around. since I did not tell the teacher where to meet him. I walk to 　
The corner of the corridor that lead to the teacher’s office
老師就突然從背後叫住我.跟我招手.要我從反方向跟去.走了幾秒鐘之後.
Suddenly, the teacher call me and wave at me. He want me walk to opposite direction, after I walk for couple seconds,
老師就突然從辦公室出現.跟我說:你要去哪?我馬上回頭.之後又轉頭回去看時.那相同叫住我的人已經不見了.
The teacher shown up in the office and ask me ”Where are you going?” I turn my head right the way then turn back again, the person who called me is not there any more.
我心裡想不會吧!這麼神奇.至今我還是不肯相信那是我的幻覺
I have been wondering! This is not possible, it sound supernatural, I can not believe till now that it really happen and not my imagination.

補充 : 中文原文, 寫的不是很通順, 翻譯英文時, 還須要稍為改一下意思,
比如說 ”至今我還是不肯相信那是我的幻覺” 是不是改成 ”至今我還是不肯相信那是事實而不是我的幻覺”比較通暢一點呢

Answer 3

翻譯機 is bad, bad, bad!!!

2005-09-22 05:02:03 補充：
Today I would like to talk about my experience. When I was in the fourth grade, my math was pretty bad, and I was constantly getting low grades. During the summer break, my mother got in touch with my teacher. He was also hoping to help me improve my math skills, so he asked mom to take me to school the next day.
When I arrived the next morning, the school was pretty empty due to the break. Since we did not decide on a meeting place, I headed down the hallway toward his office. Suddenly I heard my teacher call me from behind and waved for me to turn around. As I turned around and walked for a moment, my teacher appeared from his office, said "Where are you going?" I turned and saw him. I then turned to find the first person, but he was nowhere to be found. I thought to myself, "No way. This is really wicked." Till today I still can not beileve my imagination.

Answer 4

I must say today am my by oneself experience In our country small 4 grades summer vacation period Because mathematics is very bad Continuously tests not well Thereupon mother on contacts with teacher Teacher also hoped can help me to strengthen mathematics Informed mother previous day to lead me to go to the school to help me to strengthen Previous day early in the morning I to school when At that time because was the summer vacation School no person I also do not have and teacher approximately the place Thereupon walks to teacher the office that corridor corner Teacher suddenly stops by calling out me from behind Beckons with me Wants me with to go from the reversed direction After walked several seconds Teacher on suddenly appears from the office Said with me that, You must go? I turn head immediately Turns the head to look afterwards time That same stopped by calling out me the person already to disappear In my heart thought that, Cannot! Such mysterious Until now I or am not willing to believe that is my illusion