自己讀英文蠻類的，請幫我看一下我寫的這個短文是否有錯﹖
如果有錯錯在那兒呢﹖
Yesterday I called my friend, but he did not at home. So I went to the movie with my dog,
And I went my friend's girlfriend's home played after the movie.
It was a wonderful day.
2005-09-02 21:55:48 · 5 個解答 · 發問者 Anonymous in 社會與文化 ➔ 語言
剛剛自己看發現一些不足的第方
went 後面要加to
為went to my friend's girlfriend's home.
wonderful day是不是要改成wonderful of day.
2005-09-02 21:58:38 · update #1
請問用
He did not at home是錯的嗎﹖
為什麼要用was呢﹖
2005-09-02 22:00:29 · update #2
什麼是介係詞@@"|
2005-09-02 22:01:01 · update #3
He did not at home是錯的嗎﹖
為什麼要用was呢﹖
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這句本身就沒有be動詞
所以你要加be動詞~就是was
did助動詞是在本身就有動詞的狀況下~才會用
還有~So I went to the movie with my dog,
And I went my friend's girlfriend's home played after the movie.
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在第一個movie~建議加a不要加the~在對方讀你的文章不知道是什麼movie的情況下~要用a~第二個才加the~除非你已經寫出是什麼電影~第一個就可加the
And I went my friend's girlfriend's home played after the movie.
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and 最好不要放句首~可以用Also、Morover、In addition代替~
這句可以改成
I also went to the home of my friend's girlfriend to played after the movie.(不太確定)
of就是介係詞
wonderful day是不是要改成wonderful of day.
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不用~wonderful就是形容詞了~
wonderful day就好
2005-09-02 22:49:43 · answer #1 · answered by ? 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
He did not at home是錯的嗎﹖
尼知道，do(did) not 是為了幫助動詞表現否定，才會出現的字
so 沒動詞，它根本就沒必要出現:)
And I went my friend's girlfriend's home played after the movie
英文寫play(玩)會讓人看不懂，play是指play music, play baseball, 還是play什麼東西，so可以參考修改成如下
then I went to the girl's home after that who is my friend's girlfriend (and we had a good time).
Yesterday I called my friend, but he was not at home. So I went to the movie with my dog,
then I went to the girl's home who is my friend's girlfriend and had a good time after that.
It was a wonderful day.
(PS.看電影可以帶狗狗哦?!)
2005-09-02 23:40:58 · answer #2 · answered by Jilly_b 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You....went to the movie with your dog???
2005-09-02 23:05:46 · answer #3 · answered by 向賢 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
And I went to my friend's girlfriend's home to played after the movie.
應該是在加進介係詞
2005-09-02 21:59:47 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Yesterday I called my friend, but he was not home. Therefore, I went to the movie with my dog. After the movie, I went to the home of my friend's girlfriend to play. It was a wonderful day.
2005-09-02 21:58:43 · answer #5 · answered by D L 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋