One impressive travel/trip..15

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One impressive travel/trip
這是上台介紹的題目之一，因為時間的不足，加上還要背誦，
所以來請高手及有心的好人來幫個忙吧…先說聲感謝
所以請試著以自已的口氣及立場來寫，讓我做做參考吧！
大約15-20句，這樣應該夠我唸個兩分鐘了啦！

謝謝意見，讓我知道他在耍人，
唉…不知他的心態是什麼？
這麼好寫的題目竟搞成這樣子…
這樣我一定不會選他的，寧願十五點都不要了…

SuperJim 如此的惡意，想我會把點數給他嗎？
當然絕對不會的，我只是想看看到底有沒有其他人見義勇為的來寫而已，我就給把點數給下去
只不過多謝這惡意的教訓喔！這作文真的很簡單也很好寫，我自已也有寫，早就打好了，只不過差在好壞而已
這對我是很正式的一件事，七個上台介紹的題目順利完成了，當然都是我自已寫的...

這是我自已親手寫的作文，不好意思讓大家見笑了喔
Traveling is my favorite activity. Nothing in the world can not compare with traveling around. In my special experience, I went to a trip to the eastern Taiwan by myself. It was the first time that I left my hometown alone to a far away place.

Contrary to my hometown, it is a small country, where is famous for its magnificent scenery. The view is so beautiful that I swam outside, took spa, and enjoyed myself very much. I had a good time in traveling at the eastern Taiwan.

In a word, if I have once more opportunities, I will make a point of sightseeing it again.

原來如此，我懂了！為什麼大家都沒來幫我的真正原因了，我真的只是想參考而已說...哈哈
要不是有個人提供意見說可以來知識發問，找人幫我忙，用點數一定有人會提供你參考的文章...

SuperJim要不要來再寫一篇啊？我等著看就是了

原本認為SuperJim是很有英文能力卻愛來整人搞怪的...
原來是場誤解，多謝幫忙修改文章，現在對你又改觀了
也讓我發現自己無心的小錯誤了，在此致上敬禮( 而那位老師寫的也不錯，很有句型架構，但不知為何第二篇的標點符號卻很不清楚= =?不過真的很感謝了~~~
但我覺得兩個人自已寫的作品好像有點離題了，不知道是從travel/trip的定義延深出來的嗎？
也很難決定選那個人好?所以決定要讓各位來評選啦！

SuperJim要不要再來拿20點x2呢？請去下面那個網址看http://tw.knowledge.yahoo.com/question/?qid=1205081201900

Answer 1

身為老師,給你兩篇供參考: 最好不要照抄
{1}The taxi ride I shall never forget is the one I experienced a long time ago when I was only six years old. One summer evening I felt a little unwell and had a headache. Instead of letting this be known to my parents, I went to sleep. It was not until my mother awoke me that I found myself really ill. Mother felt my forehead and exclaimed, “Ron’s running a temperature again!” Immediately father called a taxi to rush us to a hospital. In those days the local taxis were generally not air-conditioned; besides, it was a hot day. I felt very ill with a high temperature inside the stuffy taxi, but I did not cry because I was too weak to do that. The taxi driver was speeding, yet tome it was still a long and slow journey, Finally we arrived at the hospital. I can’t remember what happened later. All I can remember is that I had a terrible headache that day. I am now no’ longer so easily taken ill al I used to be, but I shall never forget that taxi ride in my life.

{2}Nothing has impressed me so much as the taxi ride I had about two years ago One night on my way home I lost control of my motorbike and got badly hurt when I was hurtled to the ground As I came to I found myself lying on the road with blood all over my body since it was in the dead of night there was not a soul around except some cars passing occasionally so I halloed to the cars while they were approaching The drivers however simply turned a deaf ear to my cry for help It was when I was about to give up that a taxi suddenly pulled up beside to my cry for help It was when I was about to give up that a taxi suddenly pulled up beside me. The taxi driver got off and came to my rescue. He drove me to a hospital as fast as he could. And I lost my consciousness against until a doctor was putting cast on my leg. When I woke up a smiling young man came to ask me how I was feeling and then something about my address and telephone number. And what happened next, as I can remember, was the arriving of my parents, their complaints about my carelessness, and many thanks, of course, to the driver. But the fact that I neglected to ask his name make me sick everytime I thought of this negligence. Yet, isn’t it a memorable experience about a taxi ride?

2005-08-14 22:57:58 補充：
第二篇旖旎的功力應該沒問題 看得懂吧~

Answer 2

SuperJim太過分了吧!!
沒事花時間打這種害人的文章幹麻!
要**你自己去吃!

Answer 3

林旺, don't use SuperJim's piece. He is mocking you. In case you don't understand, let me put it in simple terms - he wants you to tell people that you ate your own shit!

Answer 4

Traveling is my favorite activity. Nothing in the world can compare with traveling around. I had a special experience that I took a trip to the eastern Taiwan by myself. It was the first time that I've traveled away from my hometown alone to a far away place. Because the train system in Taiwan is very well established, I took the train to eastern Taiwan.  It only took approximately two hours to get there.Contrary to my hometown, eastern Taiwan is a small country where it's known for its magnificent scenery. The view is so beautiful that I swam outside, took a spa, and enjoyed myself. I also took a hike to the nearby mountain just so that I may have a better birdview of the town.  The hike up was fairly easy as the mountain already has a hiking trail.  Hiking in and out of woods and forrests, it's an experience that one must go through to truly enjoy it.  Overall, I had a good time in visiting the eastern Taiwan.If I have another opportunities to travel, I will make a point of sightseeing eastern Taiwan again.--------------------------------------------------------------One Impressive TripOn a Sunday afternoon, I didn't feel like cooking.  So I thought I would simply go out and grab a McDonald Big Mac.  Since there is a McDonald nearby, the trip to and back from McDonald was short and painless.  Some might consider it to be impressive.Once I got the Big Mac, I decided to enjoy it while watching some TV.  I had my Big Mac, fries, and drinks ready and grab the remote control.  Since the Sony's remote control is so small, I accidentally dropped it in my Big Mac and knocked over the drinks.  The soda spilled on top of the Big Mac and made it a little soggy.  But I didn't want to throw it away because I felt that would be too much of a waste.  So I ate the soggy Big Mac and fries.Couple of hours later, I felt the Big Mac kicking and screaming in my stomach.  I rushed into the bathroom and dumped a huge load.  I have a habit of looking over the load whenever I take a huge dump.  This time, I noticed that the vegetable weren't digested at all.  I thought that was a waste as well, so I grab the vegetable and ate it again.  I don't remember anything else afterward as I woke up couple of days later in a hospital.  Now this has been my impressive trip.

2005-08-12 22:06:56 補充：
解憂公主, the reason why I wrote this is to teach people not to take whatever answer is given to them. There're way too many people abuse this forum to cheat on their homework and assignments.