person influences you most?.20

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The person who influences you the most.
這是上台介紹的題目之一，因為時間的不足，加上還要背誦，
所以來請高手及有心的好人來幫個忙吧…先說聲感謝
所以請試著以自已的口氣及立場來寫，讓我做做參考吧！
大約15-20句，這樣應該夠我唸個兩分鐘了啦！

這個題目本來就不好上台說啦！
可是那一篇，我真的看的不懂...= ="
各位大大，我點數本來就很少了，
還要多付上十點的代價…
想說贈20點，在重賞下必有勇夫
怎麼只有一個來幫忙而已…
大家的心態到底是什麼啊？？
誰說第一個一定拿得到點數呢？
雖然也有可能拿不到20點數，
不過會獻上我最真誠的感謝，
這比點數更珍貴，不是嗎？

意見說的好，不好意思是我太心急了，
原來大家的心態是這樣想的喔~對不起啦！
幫我翻譯如下：
影響我最深的是我的高中英文老師，
她上課跟學生互動很好，也用心仔細的教導，
對大家很鼓勵，上課時不停的為我們加油打氣。
講了很多經驗，也教導了我們為人處事的大道理。
她平時待人客氣，做事認真，不打馬乎，很少生氣罵人
她的行為與言語一致，也常留落後的學生課後補救。
只要肯努力讀英文，她就願意幫學生辛苦的改作文。
讓學生知道英文的廣泛，不斷的鼓勵學生自我進修學習

不是我不想給點數喔！是我真的看不懂文章的最開始
"HA-KU-NA MA-TA-TA" It mean's don't worry from the movie, "The Lion King." But it is the first time for me to using this saying. 由其是HA-KU-NA MA-TA-TA這什麼東西啊？
不知道身為老師你還會不會再回來這看，不過隨緣啦！
不背點東西上台怎麼可能說的出什麼話來呢？

身為老師的你，要誤解我的意思，那我也就算了
知道為什麼會說影響我最深的是高中英文老師嗎？
唉…我當初怎麼會沒想到上台介紹題目之一
My favorite Enlish teacher...可以拿來再利用哩= ="
而且怎麼會說成口是心非呢？天底下總有好老師吧？
沒人來幫忙翻譯嗎？那我自已動手來寫好了…哈~~~
也來發表我寫的文章翻譯，但看有誰能幫忙修改呢？？各位請來評評理，也去下面那個網址投票吧
http://tw.knowledge.yahoo.com/question/?qid=1205081201963

The person who influences me the most is my favorite English teacher, Ms. Wu, who made better interactions with students in the class, and really taught us carefully.

Of often, she kept on encouraging everybody to study hard and hard in order to enter our ideal universities. And she told us her experience of school life from senior high to abroad school, even said she kept on studying in order to go further learning in Britain.

She is polite, earnest, and always good temper to treat us though strict but very good to us. Her behavior is accord to her words, which taught us the principles of conduct.

Furthermore, she was willing to stay after school to help some students falling behind the lessons.

As long as you wanted to study hard in English, she must be ready to correct our writings without fail, which let us know the widespread of English and did best to cheer us on pursuing further education.

Nevertheless, she is certainly the person who influences me the most.

有誰要來幫我修改文章呢？
有誰要來幫忙找文法及用字詞性上的錯誤呢？
不只是送上20點，加上我的最致高感謝(<^.^)

此致 Trinidad 獨行俠：
那我在此很認真的跟老師說聲對不起，
不好意思喔！老師的時間值幾千元的。
我知道態度需要改進，我也不是故意...
老師難過，我也很傷心，當初用意也不是這樣
但怎麼知道竟然會搞成這樣的局面呢....？

Answer 1

The Person Who Influences Me The Most


"HA-KU-NA MA-TA-TA" It mean's don't worry from the movie, "The Lion King." But it is the first time for me to using this saying. I always have a lot of biology problems, even though I like biology or not it, it still gives me some problems. So I spend all weekend to find my teacher to teach and help me with these problems.

First I though they were small problems, but I knew that one day they will become big problems, and I will have los of wrong things to deal with.I don't like it. My biology teacher knew I had problems, she told me to wait for her after school. She wented me to figure out the anwers and help me.

She not only solved my problems, but also taught me something I didn't know. So I learnt the principles and rules better than all my classmates even easier methods than the biology books. Beside being my teacher she also became my good friend. Sometimes we go shopping together and I like her very much.

When biology was becoming everyone's problems, I always say, "HA-KU-NA MA-TA-Ta." It's not my problem. Thanks to my teacher. She seemed to me like a, "God of Biology".

2005-08-12 21:40:43 補充：
身為老師,我不鼓勵背英文,尤其不是自己的故事,說了會心虛吧!再說你的口氣是,不情願給那20點,是嗎?我的故事是幫你有個參考的方向~助你成長

2005-08-14 22:46:59 補充：
"HA-KU-NA MA-TA-TA" It mean's don't worry from the movie, "The Lion King."
You may see the movie, ok? Or you can guess that's just a word means : don't worry. Don't worry about your scores , ok?

2005-08-14 22:54:02 補充：
I took a look at your writing. 妳要注意一下詞性和文法喔!~~:)

2005-08-15 23:31:22 補充：
妳如果一開始要我幫你改我一定會很樂意的,但是你的態度需要改進,我花了約幾千元的時間幫妳卻換來的態度讓我很難過,我真的很忙~~

Answer 2

我建議你可以先把自己想要說的大綱PO上來喔 這樣大家比較有個方向能夠幫你 到時候自己要背 也比較輕鬆^^