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Question

1. I came to United States in 2001.

2. I not have any family in this country.

3. I live with some friends for a month.

4. I found a job, but I no like it.

5. In my country I have a better job.

6. At first, I am very lonely.

7. I miss my family a lot, so I called them every week.

8.It very expensive to call them.

9. My first year was difficult because I don't speak English.

10. I begin to study English at an adult school.

Answer 1

1. I came to United States in 2001.
I csme to the United States in 2001.
(美國的正式稱呼前面要加個定冠詞 the United Stattes)

2. I not have any family in this country.
I do not have a family in this country.
（一個人應該只有一個家庭。原文好像表示「我在這個國家力沒有任何家
庭，但在別的國家可能有好幾個」。）

3. I live with some friends for a month.
Correct

4. I found a job, but I no like it.
I got a job, but I don't like it.
（I found a job 是中式英語。英文裡的 " find" 是「發現一樣東西」的意思。
" get " 則表示 「得到」一個工作。）
5. In my country I have a better job.
I have a better job in my country.
（原文也沒錯。不過，沒有特殊原因的話，表示地點的介係詞片語應該放在
句尾。）
6. At first, I am very lonely.
Correct
7. I miss my family a lot, so I called them every week.
I miss my family a lot, so I call them every week.
（我想念家裡，我每週都打電話回家。這已經成了習慣，所以 " call "要用現在
式，表示一種習慣。）

8.It very expensive to call them.
It is very expensive to call them.
（原文漏了一個Be動詞，不成為一個完整的句子。）

9. My first year was difficult because I don't speak English.
My first year was very difficult, because I could not speak fluent English.
（我第一年過得很辛苦，因為我英文說得不好。後者不能說成 " I don't speak
English." 這樣講表示「我一句英文都不會講」，事實上不可能。只是第一年
講得不夠流利，所以很辛苦。）

10. I begin to study English at an adult school.
I begin with stuying English at an adult school.
（原文的中譯應該是 「我開始在一間成人學校學英文」。但從發問者這篇文
章的上下文來看，他應該想要表達的是 「因為我英文不好，所以先進成人
學校學起」，所以才建議改為 " I begin with stuying English at an adult
school. " ）

Answer 2

第六個句子, 因為是at first, 我想用過去式應該會比較好, At first, I was very lonely.