幫忙一下~~急~~英文翻譯和對話

Question

1.What are you going to do next weekend?
I will clean my house next weekend.-----可以這樣回答嗎?
2.What are your favorite clothes?
My favorite clothes are white T-shirts.-----可以這樣回答嗎?
3. 在我十八歲生日的時候，我爸爸送我一台期待很久的摩托車給我，我好高興也很感動。
My father sends me a motorcycle that expects for a long time at eight years old. I am very excited and move.-----幫我看一下這樣有沒有錯，也可以幫我補充一下句子哦!
4.我朋友送我的一隻貓在去年生病而過逝了，我非常難過，雖然和他相處短短幾個月，但是有了它我的陪伴我一點也不孤單，希望在天國的它也能很快樂。
My friend sends me a cat,getting sick to die last year,I am very sad,although get along with only a few months, had it me to keep company with me, I am not solitary at all,it hoping in the Kingdom of Heaven also can be very happy. ---------幫我看一下這樣有沒有錯，也可以幫我補充一下句子

Answer 1

小青
1. What are you going to do next weekend? I will clean my house next weekend.
蔡英文
1. What are you going to do next weekend? I will clean my house.

小青
2. What are your favorite clothes? My favorite clothes are white T-shirts.
蔡英文
2. What is your favorite wear? I like white T-shirts.

小青
3. My father sends me a motorcycle that expects for a long time at eight years old. I am very excited and move.
蔡英文
3. My father gave me a motorcycle as my 18-year birthday gift which I have been longing for a long time. I was so happy and deeply moved.

小青
4. My friend sends me a cat, getting sick to die last year, I am very sad, although get along with only a few months, had it me to keep company with me, I am not solitary at all, it hoping in the Kingdom of Heaven also can be very happy.
菜英文
4. The cat my friend gave me passed away from sickness last year. Although we got together only for a few months, but I was so sad. When he was with me I was not lonely at all, so I wish him very happy in the heaven. (雖不知道貓的性別，但是把它擬人化以表親暱。He在性別不明時，可以表示通性。)

Answer 2

1. What are you going to do next weekend? I "am going to" clean my house (next weekend).
因為是用being going to問的, 所以也要用being going to回答
will 是用在比較不特定/不確定的未來時間, 例如: I will get married one day (我未來有一天會結婚)....還不確定什麼時候事情會發生.

2. What are your favorite "clothing"? (clothing 是衣著的統稱)
My favorite clothing are white T-shirts.
clothes 用法和clothing 有些許的不同, I have lots of clothes at home....這時不會用clothing.

3. My father "gave" me a motorcycle, which I "had" been longing for long time, for my 18-year birthday. I was so excited (or happy) and touched (感動).
give someone something for ones birthday ->是表達送某人某物以做為生日禮物的最普遍表達

4. The cat which a friend (用a friend 比用my friend 好; 因為你通常不只有一個朋友, 除非文中已提過這位送貓的朋友, 否則用 "a" friend更適當) gave me passed away last year because of certain disease (ㄧ般的 sickness 應該還不至於致命). I was very sad about this. Even though it was only a couple of months that we got to spend time together, I never felt lonely with his/her (視貓狗的性別) company. I really hope that (s)/he is also happy now in heaven.

這樣翻比較沒有中式英文的感覺....也順便修正ㄧ下上面那一位的錯誤~