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Question

The second Sunday in May is Mother’s Day.
How will we creative ways to celebrate Mother’s Day?
五月的第二個星期天就是母親節了,該用什麼妙點子來慶祝偉大的母親呢?

Dear Diary, do you know? I was a naughty girl and often skipped classes, when I was a kid. Although, my mom are very well-educated, so all I am , or can be, I owe to my angel mother. However, I still often argue and even talk back with my mom as I get older. In spite of knowing she treats me as love well, whip well from her within.
But I cant tolerate that someone keeps nagging by my ears. ‘’sigh’’! I seldom have disagreement with my friends and have more patience towards them. I still don’t know why the more intimate people are to me, the less patience I have. Its easy to show my hot-temper with family.
親愛的日記呀!你知道嗎?我小時候很調皮,也常翹課,但母親依舊很重視小孩的教育,我的成就即能力都該歸功於我慈愛的母親呀!然而,長大後,還會常常跟媽媽頂嘴吵架,雖然曉得母親是出自於「 愛 之深,責之切」,但在我這年齡還是很受不了有人一直在我耳邊睟睟唸。唉!為什麼我對朋友就能有耐心,而對家人就容易發脾氣呢?

Mother is like our home’s castle. You’ve been too busy taking care of this family, mom. Mommy’s done so much for us we have to let you know how much we appreciate you. Y mom’s favorite flower was the pink carnation. Carnation represent the sweetness, warm and endurance of mother’s love. And then make her a Mother’s Day card. I hope Mother’s Day will strengthen family bonds.
母親就像是家的城堡。媽!你太忙於照顧整個家了,你為我們付出那麼多,在這特別的日子,我們要讓你知道有多感激你。母親最喜歡的花就是粉紅康乃馨,代表母愛的甜美,溫馨和耐心,然後在做一張母親節賀卡給他,希望能藉由母親節強化家庭的凝聚力。

I really appreciate the things my mom do for me, and for all the loving things you’ve done to help the family day by day, for guidance and for tender care you’ve given us along the way, Mum, you deserve our warm thanks and special love. I’ll take care of you forever and ever!
我真的很感謝母親為我做的每一件事,你日復一日幫助家人,不辭勞苦,你一路扶持,細心呵護著我們,我會永遠照顧你直到永遠。

Answer 1

五月的第二個星期天就是母親節了,
The second Sunday in May is Mother’s Day.

該用什麼妙點子來慶祝偉大的母親呢?
How will we creative ways to celebrate Mother’s Day?
(這裡你只有助動詞卻少了動詞)
(How will we find creative ways to celebrate Mother's Day?)


親愛的日記呀!
Dear Diary,

你知道嗎?我小時候很調皮,也常翹課,
Do you know? I was a naughty girl and often skipped classes, when I was a kid.
(Did you know that I was a class skipping naughty little kid?)
(你可知道我曾經是一個愛翹課的調皮小孩?)

但母親依舊很重視小孩的教育,我的成就即能力都該歸功於我慈愛的母親呀!
Although, my mom are very well-educated, so all I am , or can be, I owe to my angel mother.
(mother是單數, subject-verb agreement, 要用也要用單數動詞. angel 式動詞, 用來當形容詞該變成 angelic)
(還有你這裡的英文讀起來是說你媽媽有受過高等教育, 而不是你媽媽很重視小孩的教育)
(Despite of that, my mother still thought education is very important, and I have my angelic mother to thank for for all that I have achieved today.)
(儘管如此, 我母親還是重視小孩的教育, 而我的今天的一切成就都該歸功於我母親)

然而,長大後,還會常常跟媽媽頂嘴吵架,
However, I still often argue and even talk back with my mom as I get older.
(是talk back "to", 而不是 talk back "with")
(However, I still often argue and even talk back to my mother even as I get older)
(然而, 在我長大後我還是常常會跟媽媽吵架, 甚至跟他頂嘴.)

雖然曉得母親是出自於「 愛 之深,責之切」,但在我這年齡還是很受不了有人一直在我耳邊睟睟唸。
In spite of knowing she treats me as love well, whip well from her within. But I cant tolerate that someone keeps nagging by my ears. ‘
( In spite of the fact that she scolds at me because she loves me, I still can't stand having her nagging me at the age I am at now.)
(儘管母親的責備是出自於他的愛, 我還是很不能忍受我到了這個年齡他還要一直唸我)

唉!為什麼我對朋友就能有耐心,而對家人就容易發脾氣呢?
’sigh’’! I seldom have disagreement with my friends and have more patience towards them. I still don’t know why the more intimate people are to me, the less patience I have. Its easy to show my hot-temper with family.
(Sigh! Oh why can I stand my friends, but always have a hot temper with my family?)
(唉! 為什麼我就可以忍受我的朋友, 但是一遇到家人就容易發脾氣?)

母親就像是家的城堡。
Mother is like our home’s castle.
(Mom! You are like a castle that protects us.)
(媽! 你像座城堡一樣的保護著我們)

媽!你太忙於照顧整個家了,你為我們付出那麼多,在這特別的日子,我們要讓你知道有多感激你。
You’ve been too busy taking care of this family, mom. Mommy’s done so much for us we have to let you know how much we appreciate you.
(Mom! You've been too busy taking care care of this family, and devoting yourself to us. On this special day, we have to let you know just how much we appreciate you.)

母親最喜歡的花就是粉紅康乃馨,代表母愛的甜美,溫馨和耐心,然後在做一張母親節賀卡給他,希望能藉由母親節強化家庭的凝聚力。
Y mom’s favorite flower was the pink carnation. Carnation represent the sweetness, warm and endurance of mother’s love. And then make her a Mother’s Day card. I hope Mother’s Day will strengthen family bonds.
(不可以用was!! 除非你媽媽已經過世了, 或是他已經不在喜歡那種花了)
(subject-verb agreement)
(不平行, endurance 也不太對)
(I want to give my mom her favorite flower which is the pink carnation. Carnation represent the sweetness, the warmth, and patience of her love. Also I want to give her a Mother's day card made by me. I hope that this Mother's day will bring my family even closer)
(我要送給我母親他最喜歡的粉紅康乃馨. 康乃馨代表著母親的甜美,溫馨和耐心. 然後在做一張母親節賀卡給他. 我希望這一個母親節可以讓我們家更親近)

Answer 2

How should we make some surprise idea to celebrate Mother’s Day?
五月的第二個星期天就是母親節了,該用什麼妙點子來慶祝偉大的母親呢?
===>上面改這段

Dear Diary, do you know? I was a naughty girl and often skipped classes, when I was a kid. My mother is still value about children-educated, my all achievements and
ability should owe to my greatness mother!!! However I was grow up, still quarrel with my mother, Alought aware of my mother form"Love depth, punish depth" But in my this age still can't handle somebody always repeat again and again about one thing. alas! why my friend have so much patient for me, but my family easly to blow up?

(因為家人的愛是沒有理由的<===我的回答) 我身體開始不好了 睡覺先....

mother in the family like castel. mon! you are so busy to care this home whole, you give all love for us, in this specially date, We desire let you aware of how appreciate we are. mother prefer's flower is pink carnation, it's stand for how sweet of mother's love, warm and fragrant and patient, and then to make mother's greeting card, hope able connect Mother's day to make the family to get more and more love.

I really appreciate mother every give us thing, you help us day after day, never to make nothing of hardships, alway take care us, .careful attention us to grow up, I'll take care of you forever and ever!!!

當你寄的時候 我已經到一半了~~>"<~~ 就不要放棄