拜託幫我中翻英20點

Question

參觀人體展
去年我和同學一起去看了人體展,剛開始我覺得有點害怕,因為畢竟人體展是展出真人的身體,但看完後我覺得很神奇,也覺得很讚,很多身體的肌肉紋理、各種器官都十分的清楚,我發現到身體組織(神經)的部份,原來是這麼(精細)!


ps:拜託了,很急..我是文盲啊~~

Answer 1

Last year I saw the human body exhibition with classmate together,just started me feeling a trace of fear,because of after all the human body exhibition was the true person's body of the exhibition,but after seeing I felted very miraculous,also felted very great,a lot of muscle veinses of bodies,various organs were all very clear,I found the body organized(nerve) of part was so!(fine)

Answer 2

以上幾篇都不脫「中式英文」色彩，通順度也可再加強。專有名詞像神經組織(nervous system)也都拼錯了。

Answer 3

I went to the human body exhibition with my calssmates last year. At first, the exhibition made me feel a little scare,becouse it showed the real human body. After all, I thought that was an amazing trip. The muscle and organs of a human body are very destinct. On top of that, I found out the nerver organization of the body is neat and meticulous!

Answer 4

Visited the human body to unfold last year me and the schoolmate looks at the human body to unfold together, just started me to think a little was afraid, because after all the human body unfolded displays honorable person's body, after but looked I thought very mysteriously, also thought approved very much, the very many bodily muscle texture, each kind of organ all extremely clarity, I discovered bodily organization (nerve) the part, originally was (is such fine)!

Answer 5

I went to the human body exhibition with my calssmates last year. At fist, the exhibition made me feel a little scare,becouse it showed the real human body. But I thought that was so magic after I saw the exhibition: the muscle and orangs of the body are very destinct, and finally I found out the nerver organization of the body are so meticulous!

大致上是這樣囉！^^希望能幫到你

2005-04-14 13:56:30 補充：
那請問"神經系統"又要怎麼說呢？
組織跟系統不太一樣吧！