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I live in a small town in Spain. Fifty years ago the town was very different.
A lot of people lived in the country.
There were houses with a big courtyard, and in that there were a lot of animals like rabbits or chickens.
It wasn’t any supermarket because there were a lot of little shops.
There weren’t schools, because the people learned in the catholic schools.

People is very different too. Fifty years ago when you has more or less fourteen years, you has to work or help a lot in your house because the people used to has a lot of children and all of them ate.
If you want study, you will do it at night.

My grandparents lived in the town fifty year ago. They say that the roads were made of soil and when you want to go anywhere you had to go on foot or by bike. They didn’t use to use motorbikes and cars because they were very expensive. But they weren’t want that because despite everything they think that they lived well.

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Necesita correcciones. Te pongo lo que escribiste y después, sómo lo diría yo.

"There were houses with a big courtyard, and in that there were a lot of animals like rabbits or chickens."
"There were houses with a big courtyard, where there were a lot of animals like rabbits and chickens."

"It wasn’t any supermarket because there were a lot of little shops."
"There wasn’t any supermarket because there were a lot of little shops."

"There weren’t schools, because the people learned in the catholic schools."
"There weren’t schools, because people used to go to catholic schools."
Aquí falta algo... o hay algo raro. ¿Había o no había escuelas? Tal vez falta precisar algo en "There weren't schools..."

"People is very different too."
"People was very different too."

"Fifty years ago when you has more or less fourteen years, you has to work or help a lot in your house because the people used to has a lot of children and all of them ate."
"Fifty years ago, when one was more or less fourteen years old, one had to work or help a lot in their house because people used to have a lot of children and all of them had to be fed."

Voy a dejar el uso de "you", pero yo seguiría usando "one":
"If you want study, you will do it at night."
"If you wanted to study, you had do it at night."

"They say that the roads were made of soil and when you want to go anywhere you had to go on foot or by bike"
"They say that the roads were not paved and when you wanted to go anywhere you had to go on foot or by bike."

"But they weren’t want that because despite everything they think that they lived well."
"But they didn't want that because despite of everything they thought they lived well."

Traté de dejarlo lo más cercano a lo que tenías.