per avermi opitato un mese a casa sua a Londra.
Dear aunt Tiziana,
I hope you are find. I and my family are fine!!
I want to thank you because you was very kind with me when i was in London.
I had a lot of funny and you and you family were very polite, helpful and available with me.
I'm very grateful to you for your kindness!! When i stayed in London I improved my english, too, and it is important for me because I go in a important school.
I remember the moments passed together with joy. I miss you and your family.
I hope that ane day you will come in Rome so you and you family will stay in my house, if you want!! In Rome there are a lots of monuments and during the week-end I will take you in the centre of Rome and we will also listen a concert, go in a theatre......
All my love,
Giulia
.....so che ho fatto un pò di errori.....mi potete aiutare a trovarli per migliorare la mia lettera?? Grazie 1000 a tutti!!
2007-03-26 01:48:43 · 11 risposte · inviata da !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 3 in Scuola ed educazione ➔ Scuole primarie e secondarie
si è un compito che devo fare x casa..........
2007-03-26 02:12:00 · update #1
SO CHE è UN Pò RIPETITIVA MA DOVEVO SCRIVERE 120-130 PAROLE..........E NON SAPEVO PIù KE SCRIVERE.......
2007-03-26 02:22:27 · update #2
Dear aunt Tiziana,
I hope you are finE. ME and my family are fine, TOO!!
I want to thank you because you WERE very kind TO me when I was in London.
I had a lot of FUN and you and youR family were very GENTLE (polite significa EDUCATO), helpful and RELIABLE (available è riferito agli oggetti) TO me.
I'm very grateful to you for your kindness!! When I stayed in London I improved my English, too, and it is important for me because I'M GOING TO ATTEND ANimportant school.
I remember the moments passed together with joy. I miss you and your family.
I hope that ONE day you will come TO Rome so you and youR family will stay in my house, if you want!! In Rome there are lots of monuments and during the week-end I'D (condizionale) take you in the centre of Rome and we COULD also GO TO A concert, go TO THE theatre......
All my love,
Giulia
2007-03-26 02:01:46 · answer #1 · answered by Penelope2015 2 · 2⤊ 1⤋
quella di penelope è perfetta... salvo un paio di cosine che ti ricorreggo
non usare GENTLE ma KIND
i moment non sono passed ma SPENT
da parte mia dito in su a penelope altrimenti prendi così com'è quella di momi - dito in su anche a lei!!!.
2007-03-26 02:11:37 · answer #2 · answered by Master X 6 · 2⤊ 1⤋
HO LO STESSO PROBLEMA TUO : NON RIESCO A CONCENTRARMI BENE QUANDO STUDIO PERCHÈ HO ALTRO according to l. a. TESTA. DICIAMO CHE CIO DIPENDE ANCHE DA COME MI SENTO QUANDO CERCO DI STUDIARE : SE HO l. a. TESTA INVASA DA MILIARDI DI PENSIERI CAMPA CAVALLO !!! ALTRIMENTI FACCIO UN PICCOLO SFORZO.. IL CONSIGLIO CHE TI DO QUANDO TI ACCADONO COSE DEL GENERE È DI LIBERARE l. a. TUA MENTE DA QUESTI PENSIERI,MAGARI FACENDOTI UN RIPOSINO ...E POI METTERTI A STUDIARE O DEDICARTI PRIMA DELLO STUDIO advert UN 'ATTIVITA COSTRUTTIVA CHE TI LIBERI l. a. TESTA DAI PENSIERI (DI SICURO NE AVRAI QUALCUNA,NO ? PALESTRA,DISEGNARE,interest ECC....) DI SOLITO FUNZIONA. CIAO =)
2016-12-19 14:06:56 · answer #3 · answered by ? 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Dear aunt Tiziana,
I hope you are fine as me and the rest of the family!
I want to thank you for your kindness in my regards during my staying in London.
I had lots of fun with all of you and I appreciate all your efforts to grant me a pleasant time and all your help to improve my english, so important for me and my studies.
I miss you all, especially when I remember the time spent together and for this reason I hope to see you soon in Rome.
Imagine what beautiful moments we'll spend together while going around this beautiful city!
Think about it!
All my love,
Giulia
Allora Giulia, mi sono limitata a personalizzarla un po' perché era troppo "versione", gli errori puoi limitarli se ti eserciti a scrivere lettere in inglese per imparare a semplificare la forma: l'inglese è una lingua che ama la semplicità delle parole.
Ciao!
2007-03-26 06:10:48 · answer #4 · answered by selenia 2 · 1⤊ 1⤋
allora, riproviamo:
My dear aunt Tiziana, I hope you're FINE. My family and I are fine too. I'd like to say you many thanks for your kindness during my travel in London. You and your family were very helpful and nice with me. Since I spent my time in London, I've improved my English, and it's a very good thing for me, because I'm attending an important school here in Italy. I remember with pleasure moments I spent with all of you, and often I miss you and your family. I would be very glad if one day you'll come here in Rome. Of course, you'll be my guest. In Rome there are a lot of monuments and a lot af activities to do together.
I hope I'll see you as soon as possible.
All my love, giulia
2007-03-26 02:09:27 · answer #5 · answered by momi 3 · 1⤊ 1⤋
c'e' qualche errore pero' per il resto tutto bene...
fine non find
me and my family are
you were very kind to me
i had a lot of fun
available to me
i remember the moments spent
you and your
there are a lot
go to theatre
2007-03-26 01:58:03 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 1⤋
lettera???
a me sembra un compito a casa......
2007-03-26 01:52:53 · answer #7 · answered by teooo 3 · 2⤊ 2⤋
Dear aunt Tiziana,
I hope you are fine. Me and my family we’re fine!!
I’d like to thank you because you were very kind with me when I was in London.
I had a lot of fun and you and you family were very polite, helpful and available with me.
I'm very grateful for your kindness!! When I stay in London I improved my English too, and it is important for me because I frequent an important school.
I’ll remember the moments passed together with joy. I miss you and your family.
I hope that one day you will come in Rome so you and your family will stay at my home, if you will like to!! In Rome there are lots of monuments and during the week-end I will take you to the centre of Rome and we will also go to a concert, or to a theatre......
All my love,
Hope to see you as soon as possible
2007-03-26 02:12:09 · answer #8 · answered by thgildnakrad 4 · 1⤊ 2⤋
Dear Aunt Tiziana,
I hore you're fine (bene!). Me and my family are very fine!
I want thank you because you were very kind with me when I were in London.
You and your family were very helpful with me; and I'm very grateful to you for your kindness!! When I was in London I improved my english, and it was important for me because, now, I go to an important school.
I remember the momets passed with you! I miss you and your family. I hope one day, you'll come in Rome.. So, you'll can stay in my house. (meglio evitare quell'If you want!;P).
You know, Rome is famous because there are a lot of monuments: if you come (due futuri in una frase non ci possono essere, quindi non metti "will"), I'll take you in the centre of Rome and we'll go to a concert, then we'll go in a theatre...
All my love, Your Giulia.
Ho il massimo dei voti in inglese... spero di non aver fatto alcun errore! Fammi sapè ;P
2007-03-26 01:58:23 · answer #9 · answered by $αммЎ 3 · 1⤊ 2⤋
se me la scrivi in italiano te la traduco subito!^_^
2007-03-26 01:52:51 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 2⤋