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Question

pouvez-vous m'aider à corriger mes fautes de cet exercice d'anglais. merci beaucoup.

Junk food has invaded the world since the second World War thanks to Americans through fast food restaurants like McDonals or KFC. After, we can wonder how fast food has this success all over the world. To answer this essential question, we will pose the pros and cons of the junk food generation.
Firstly, eating in a fast food restaurant is very quickly and it is very useful for people do not have enough time or they have an overbooked timetable. After, the meal is very nutritious and full: in a hamburger there are meat, tomatoes, salad, cheese, ketchup and bread. Moreover, it is less expensive than classical restaurants.
Secondly, fast food can have many drawbacks. In fact, the food served can be unhealthy and whether people eat that everyday, they could have important disseases like heart attacks. Moreover, in many industrialized countries, governements are terrified by the obese rate growing. Actually, as in France, they compaign against Junk food. Furthermore, they are trying to educate people to eat healthily food. Yet, for some people, this food is like a drug, they can not do without hamburger or chips, and we can often see this people in this type of restaurants. In other words, the food served in can be very unhealthy if we often eat it!
To conclude, we will say fast food restaurants are very useful but also very dangerous in many conditions! So that is our opinion.

Answer 1

Bonjour!

Ma langue maternelle est anglais et j'ai fait des corrections pour vous! Il n'y avait que des petites fautes avec les temps et l'orthographe. C'est parfait maintenant!

Bonne chance!


Junk food has been invading the world since the Second World War thanks to Americans and their fast food restaurants like McDonalds and KFC. Furthermore, we are left wondering how fast food has had this rate of success all over the world. To answer this essential question, we will try to point out the pros and cons which relate to the junk food generation.

Firstly, eating in a fast food restaurant is very quick and it is very useful for people who don’t have enough time or who have a very busy schedule. Furthermore, the meal is very nutritious and filling: in a hamburger there is meat, tomatoes, salad, cheese, ketchup and bread. Moreover, it is less expensive than food in traditional restaurants.

Secondly, fast food can have many drawbacks. In fact, the food served can be unhealthy and whether or not people eat it everyday, they can get serious diseases and have heart attacks. Moreover, in many industrialised countries, governments are worried about the growing rate of obesity. They do, in fact, campaign against junk food, as in France. Furthermore, they are trying to educate people so that they eat healthy food. Nevertheless, for some people, this food is like a drug, in that they can not do without hamburgers or chips. We often see these people in these types of restaurants. In other words, the food served in them can be very unhealthy if we eat it a lot!
By way of conclusion, we can say fast food restaurants are very useful but also very dangerous in many ways! This is our overall opinion.

Answer 2

Junk food has invaded the world since the second World War through American fast food restaurants like McDonalds and KFC. Some wonder how fast food has had this success all over the world. To answer this essential question, we will pose the pros and cons of the junk food generation.

First, eating in a fast food restaurant is very quick and useful for people who do not have enough time or who are busy. In addition, the meal tastes good and is filling: in a hamburger there is meat, tomatoes, salad, cheese, ketchup and bread. Moreover, it is less expensive than classical restaurants.

However, fast food can have many drawbacks. In fact, the food served can be unhealthy and if people eat it everyday, they could risk serious health problems like heart diesease. Moreover, in many industrialized countries, governements are terrified by the growing rate of obesity. Actually, as in France, they compaign against junk food. Furthermore, they are trying to educate people to eat healthy food. Yet, for some people, this food is like a drug, they can not do without hamburgers or chips, and we can often see these people in this type of restaurant. In other words, the food served in fast food restaurants can be very unhealthy if we eat it to often!

To conclude, fast food restaurants are very popular but also very dangerous in many ways! So I would caution you to be careful.

Answer 3

Ben voilà! Tu pourras faire croire à ton prof que tu es doué en anglais!! Reste à savoir si elle/il n'y verra que du feu!

Answer 4

Junk food has been invading the world since the second World War, thanks to American fast food restaurants like McDonalds or KFC. In retrospect, we may well wonder how fast food has this success all over the world. To address this essential question, we shall pose the pros and cons of the junk food generation.
First, eating in a fast food restaurant is very quick and it is very useful for people do not have enough time or have have many pressing engagements. After all, the meal is very nutritious and complete: a hamburger contains meat, tomatoes, salad, cheese, ketchup and bread. Moreover, it is less expensive than a meal at a tradiditional restaurant.
Secondly, fast food can have many drawbacks. In fact, the food served can be unhealthy and people who eat such food every day might succumb to major diseases, such as heart attacks. Moreover, in many industrialized countries, governments are terrified by the growing rate of obesity. In common with France, they are compaigning against Junk food. Furthermore, they are trying to educate people to eat healthy food. Yet, for some people, this food is like a drug. They can not do without hamburger or chips, and we are frequently to be seen in this type of restaurant. In other words, such food can be very unhealthy if we eat it often!
To conclude, we will say fast food restaurants are very useful but also very dangerous in many respects! So that is our opinion.

Answer 5

Junk food has invaded our world since the World War II , thanks to Americans' fast food restaurants such as McDonals , Popeye, KFC,...., we can ask ourselves , how this type of restaurants have been succesful in the whole world . Answering this question, we will see the goods and bads of junk food .

The pros ; eating in a fast food restaurant is very fast and is very useful for people having not much time or beeing overbooked. Afterall , the meal is very nutritious and fullfilling . In a hamburger there is ; meat, tomatoes, salad, cheese, ketchup and bread and it is less expensive than classical restaurants.

The cons ; fast food can have many drawbacks. In fact, the food served can be unhealthy and if people eatit everyday, they could have important disseases , like heart attacks. Moreover, in many industrialized countries, governements are terrified by the obese rate growing. Actually in France, they compaign against Junk food. Furthermore, they are trying to educate people to eat healthily food. Yet, for some people, this food is like a drug, they can not do without hamburgers or chips, and we can often see this people in this type of restaurants. In other words, the food served there can be very unhealthy , if we often eat it!
To conclude, we will say fast food restaurants are very useful but also very dangerous in many ways !That is my opinion.

Je pense que tu n 'as pas pris en compte qu 'il y a des salades ,... dans ces restos .
De plus , cela coute moins cher d'acheter un casse croute dans une boulangerie .
Beaucoup de gens vont chez Mc Do , car ils offrent quelque chose pour les enfants , de plus il y a un parc pour eux .

Answer 6

j'ai essayé de corriger la ou t'as commis des fautes sementiques, mais tu devrais verifier le texte quand meme pour les fautes d'orthographe !!

Bonne chance :

Junk food has invaded the world since the second World War thanks to the Americans through their fast food restaurants like McDonals or KFC.One could only but wonder how is Fast-food being this successful all over the world. To answer this essential question, we will try to point out the pros and cons of the junk food generation.

First off, eating in a fast food restaurant is very convenient and very helpful for people not having enough time or with an overbooked timetable. Afterwards, the meal is very nutritious and complete: A hamburger for instance is comprised of meat, tomatoes, salad, cheese, ketchup and bread. Moreover, it is less expensive than any classical restaurant.

Secondly, fast food can have many drawbacks. In fact, the food served can be unhealthy and if people would eat it everyday, they are likely to catch serious disseases like heart attacks. Moreover, in many industrialized countries, governements are terrified by the obese rate growing on and on.In France for example, People are compaigning against Junk food. Furthermore, they are trying to educate people to eat healthy food. Although, for some people, this food seems like a drug, they can not do without hamburger or chips, and these are the habitués of fast-food restaurants. But these people should realise that the food served in there can be very unhealthy if they often eat it!

As a conclusion, we would say, fast food restaurants are very useful in one way, but also very dangerous other ways!

Answer 7

what?
are you josé bové?

Answer 8

do we say Mcdonals on french or McDonalds
...for people who doesn't have ...
...they couls have important diseases
Moreover ,in many industrialized countries ,GOVERNMENTS(not governements)
...to educate people to eat healthy food.
..they can not do anything without...

Answer 9

c'est du petit nègre à la sauce anglaise
ce serait trop long et fastidieux de corriger tout cela