I was standing,
in the huge ballroom,
Waiting for dancing,
I was the only on in the room,
Who wasn't moving,
I was waiting,
for your big demand,
But you're just not showing,
I was filled by pain,
And I started crying,
Dance,
Don't be lazy,
Dance,
Don't be worry,
Dance,
I want to move
on the beat
Dance,
Don't be shy,
Dance,
I will stand by,
Dance,
Why don't you care,
About me!
Finally I saw you there,
In the corner with a woman,
I thought it's just unfair,
I would like you to be my man,
Can you just take my hand,
Prove me that you love me,
Before it's the end,
Before I get crazy,
Dance,
Don't be lazy,
Dance,
Don't be worry,
Dance,
I want to move
on the beat
Dance,
Don't be shy,
Dance,
I will stand by,
Dance,
Why don't you care,
About me!
C'est moi qui l'aie écrite...qu,en pensez vous?
2007-02-04 05:11:09 · 17 réponses · demandé par Anonymous dans Amour et relations ➔ Amour et relations - Divers
Je suis en larmes...
BRAVO!
2007-02-04 05:14:38 · answer #1 · answered by cedric_karler 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
4ème ligne : the only one.
Je trouve ça très joli et très triste. Bravo
2007-02-04 13:15:24 · answer #2 · answered by Chantal ^_^ 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
tu es un tres bon artiste p.s:l'audition c'est pour quand je meurs envie d'integrer ton groupe car je suis un exellent pianiste
2007-02-04 19:11:19 · answer #3 · answered by tblboens2685 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
T'as fait une faute d'orthographe
2007-02-04 18:32:08 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Joli ^ ^
2007-02-04 17:50:38 · answer #5 · answered by kiss 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
"I would like you to be my man" :
I would want you (I'd want you) to be my man
ou
I would like that you are my man
Sinon fais attention aux syllabes, les rimes ne collent pas tout le temps.
Vers un peu courts sinon. Mais pas mal !
2007-02-04 15:12:17 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
je trouve ça super bien, continue !!!
2007-02-04 14:30:05 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 1⤋
c'est chouette, il manque juste la musique
2007-02-04 13:27:22 · answer #8 · answered by Nano 5 · 1⤊ 1⤋
Formidable. A présent, il faut trouver la musique et il ne reste plus qu'à la chanter à celui qui t'a inspiré ces paroles...que des fois il ait envie de danser.
2007-02-04 13:22:00 · answer #9 · answered by Chéro 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
C'est bien, bon courage pour la suite.
2007-02-04 13:19:06 · answer #10 · answered by Nad B 2 · 1⤊ 1⤋
Va t'eclater en boîte!!!!!!!!!!!!
2007-02-04 13:16:06 · answer #11 · answered by vero v 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋