i know there are many grammatical mistakes....check it?

Question

i have to write project proposal about cloning.my job is to write what our project will achieve . .i wrote this paragraph
"In this project we are going to define what cloning is, and shed light on the pros and cons of cloning .Also, this project will tell you where we are and where we are going from this amazing technology .Finally ,this project will conclude with recommendation for the future.
plz check it and correct it if there is any grammatical mistake?
you can change it or add some ideas .

Answer 1

Actually, it's a pretty good project statement. But there were some errors and ways to improve it:

"In this project we will define what cloning is and shed light on the pros and cons of cloning. Also, the project will tell you where we are today and where we're going in the future with this amazing technology. Finally, the project will conclude with our recommendations."

I hope this is helpful.