My love, In the dusk
when my eyes are at rest
and my world at a standstill
My minf drifts towards you
Always and forever
I long to be with you,
in your arms,
to hear you whisper
that you love me
I long for the moment...
when we can be together again.
You have given so much to me;
a love that will last
through years and challenges,
a sense of caring and sharing
that i can treasure.
You are someone Wonderful;
You are my cloest Friend.
I LOVE YOU
2006-10-15 06:47:13 · 8 answers · asked by ||| Romeo Boy ||| 4 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
I give it a 10 that is great. I like it
2006-10-15 12:37:06 · answer #1 · answered by ▒Яenée▒ 7 · 1⤊ 1⤋
It is a very pretty poem. It is well written and easy to understand without having to put alot of thought into it. I would give it a 9 1/2.
2006-10-15 13:49:59 · answer #2 · answered by Tammy G 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I'd say a 7.5.
I like it. It's very tender, but it doesn't really paint a picture. Add some similes and metaphors to make it stick and to make it more vivid. But keep going for sure, these are nice. I know I'd cry if a guy read them to me, so you're doing it right. :D
2006-10-15 14:03:24 · answer #3 · answered by Lissa 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
1 being lowest and 10 highest, i would give it a 9. it's really sweet!
2006-10-15 13:50:18 · answer #4 · answered by blondie_851851 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I'd give it an 8
2006-10-15 13:55:14 · answer #5 · answered by Bubbles Will Rule the World!!!!! 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
id giv it an 8 its good
2006-10-15 13:56:28 · answer #6 · answered by xxhelzxx 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
So heartfelt, I give it a 8...
2006-10-15 13:52:50 · answer #7 · answered by dollface 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i would say 8.5. if your writing about someone special you should read it to them and see their response.
2006-10-15 13:49:16 · answer #8 · answered by candy12424 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋