i wrote thys a long tyme ago about a guy that i realli lyked and i dunno i just wrote it but dont copy it in my own words i will report u u can copy it but put it into ur own words about your own real life expierence
a is for alone wich is how you left me
b is brave wich is what i want to be
c is for caring wich is what i thought you were
d is for desperate because u walked away
e is for everything that you did to me
f is for forgivness wich i dont think i can do
g is for god who was right there beside me
h is for my heart wich is now broken
i is for irratating wich is wut love now is
j is for joking when i thought u said goodbye
k is kindness wich u never could give
l is for love wich is what i thought we shared
m is for momentom wich is wut u killed
n nowhere wich is where im going
o is for opposites wich no longer attract
p is for playa wich is what u are and will be
q is for queen wich is how u should have treated me
r is for restless wich is wut i now try not to be
s is for sleepless because your not next to me
t is for time wich is what i waisted with you
u is for the universe wich is what you made bad
v is for violine wich is what we listened to when we went to sleep
w is for winning because u and i done
x is for x-ray because u broke my bones
y is for young wich was how we defined our love
z is well nothing because u left me
2006-09-04 07:23:51 · 14 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
btw...i dont care how i spelled the words cuz i wuz trying to talk to my friend nd do it at the same tyme the real poem has alot more advanced words not lyk prophanity lyk um smrt words i didnt have tyme to write it correctly
2006-09-04 07:31:16 · update #1
btw...i dont care how i spelled the words cuz i wuz trying to talk to my friend nd do it at the same tyme the real poem has alot more advanced words not lyk prophanity lyk um smrt words i didnt have tyme to write it correctly
2006-09-04 07:31:17 · update #2
also im thinking of showin it to a guy i realli realli lyk should i?
2006-09-04 07:34:34 · update #3
Cute, and sad.
2006-09-04 07:27:02 · answer #1 · answered by Gothic Martha™ 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I love that line "i is for irratating wich is wut love now is"..its really deep and yes i know how you feel. It sounds like this guy wasnt really all that nice to you, and you sound very sad in your poem. I can tell you wrote it completely from your heart, which i think is a really hard thing to do. And hey, dont worry ok, the right person for us always comes along when we least expect them to. So, dont be sad, alright? :) Its a beautiful poem, by the way. Please keep writing. :))
2006-09-04 07:30:25 · answer #2 · answered by Jaded 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's very sad and beautiful at the same time. Well, except for the x one, and no one can do x. I hope your heart heals quickly and you find a love that will withstand anything. May you find a man who treats you like the queen of the world and love you like there is no tomorrow.
2006-09-04 07:29:35 · answer #3 · answered by The Nana of Nana's 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Wow! i really really like it! its a poem , not a song right?? Wow, girlU have talent! you should submit this to a poem contest or something because it is awsome! i could have never made a poem that awesome! Well done!!! The poem sounds like a guy broke up with you. I am really sorry to hear that. Your poem really expressess your inner feelings and it was really sad. Nice , nice job!!
2006-09-04 07:30:33 · answer #4 · answered by Xo♥Marissa♥oX 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
thinks its the saddest little poem I've ever read, now that your not in love anymore, study up on your spelling , plus get some self worth attitude and help. You keep the 10 points little one, all has been taken from you,build up your strength and your spirit
2006-09-04 07:30:21 · answer #5 · answered by ? 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Honestly, I feel this was written while you were in high school and thats cool and all. Love is never easy, not even when you're older BUT I think it's great when people write their feelings down and share it cause you never know whos been there
2006-09-04 07:30:48 · answer #6 · answered by wilowdreams 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
They are nice lyrics, but very long, you might try adding a rythm to it and not the alphabet.
2006-09-04 07:28:07 · answer #7 · answered by guitarloverr 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
good! i like P and Z
lol it reminded me kinda of unfaithful be rihanna cuz it is sad and abt ♥
2006-09-04 07:27:51 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
wich should be "which." not like "sandwich"
irratating should be "irritating"
momentom should be "momentum"
under S, your should be "you're"
waisted should be "wasted"
He broke your bones? Damn
2006-09-04 07:27:29 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
It's cool that you were able to do that, but it sounds like you got messed up pretty bad. :(
2006-09-04 07:28:13 · answer #10 · answered by Jon K 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋