He Said/She Said
He said:
You can say it now,
As you’ve said it before
It does not change the fact
That I’ll always love you more.
Then she said:
You are very poetic
As it is very plain to see...
Yet the person who loves you more
Would definitely be me...
So he said:
A poem is a poem is a poem don't you know
As long as truth comes in rhyme.
But steady yourself for a terrible blow:
I’ve loved you more all the time.
2006-08-15 06:45:27 · 9 answers · asked by Maddog Salamander 5 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Books & Authors
Ah... I love this poem. It's very good. You guys work well as a pair.
2006-08-15 13:34:39 · answer #1 · answered by Stina 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I like it, the progression and the sentiment. All I would suggest is tightening the meter in the last stanza--read it aloud to yourself. Can you hear how it doesn't fit as smoothly as the others?
I could see this being an elegant anniversary card :o)
2006-08-15 08:25:34 · answer #2 · answered by Huerter0 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
cute yall did a good job u get a pat on the back
2006-08-15 06:53:32 · answer #3 · answered by hey_hey_hey 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Wow that came directly from the heart didnt it. You guys should really submit it.
2006-08-15 08:05:03 · answer #4 · answered by A Friend Of The Band I Swear 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
whats the question?
2006-08-15 08:09:05 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I just threw up in my mouth.
2006-08-15 07:01:39 · answer #6 · answered by Ross F 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
What is the question?
2006-08-15 06:52:41 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Awww. Where's the rest of it?
2006-08-15 07:08:46 · answer #8 · answered by The_Cricket: Thinking Pink! 7 · 0⤊ 7⤋
cute :)
2006-08-15 06:51:25 · answer #9 · answered by Cat 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋