Politics - 11 September 2006

He sent it to the White House staff for proof reading. Here is the note they sent back.
"Mr. President, we have reviewed your speech and have enclosed some suggestions for your consideration.
1. The term is "illegal immigration", not "ill eagle immigration" and it has nothing to do with sick eagles from Mexico spreading the Bird Flu.
2. We suggest you leave out the part about the "New Crusade against facist Islam". Crusades tend to make even moderate Muslims a bit nervous.
3. The term is "Axis of Evil", not "Axle of Evil", and the concept has nothing to do with the band "Guns N Roses" having links to terrorism, as you state in your speech.
4. The "Tobacco Lobby" is not a chat room on Yahoo.

We hope this clarifies some things for you. Other than the above, great speech!

Sincerely,
The White House Staff

2006-09-11 00:04:03 · 13 answers · asked by opjames 4